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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 18 April 2017 and 16 December 2017. Further details are available
on the course page. Student editor(s):
Profemanley. Peer reviewers:
Jtodd1973,
Rmlouis.
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I appreciate the lead section that offers a useful overview of Mayer's life and political activism. The Contents offer balanced sections that seem to span the most significant elements of Mayer's life and work. They also seem to offer areas for expansion as the page grows.
I have a few minor suggestions that might push the article towards more neutrality and less academic analysis:
Overall, I found this article a strong foundation from which more information might be added. Rmlouis ( talk) 16:44, 16 September 2017 (UTC)
Thanks Ross! I have made the first changes you suggested, and will work on adding additional citations when I have a few more minutes. Thanks! Profemanley ( talk)profemanley
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 18 April 2017 and 16 December 2017. Further details are available
on the course page. Student editor(s):
Profemanley. Peer reviewers:
Jtodd1973,
Rmlouis.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 23:10, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
I appreciate the lead section that offers a useful overview of Mayer's life and political activism. The Contents offer balanced sections that seem to span the most significant elements of Mayer's life and work. They also seem to offer areas for expansion as the page grows.
I have a few minor suggestions that might push the article towards more neutrality and less academic analysis:
Overall, I found this article a strong foundation from which more information might be added. Rmlouis ( talk) 16:44, 16 September 2017 (UTC)
Thanks Ross! I have made the first changes you suggested, and will work on adding additional citations when I have a few more minutes. Thanks! Profemanley ( talk)profemanley