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Reviewer: Dough4872 ( talk · contribs) 02:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (
MoS): 
- The sentence "Two people, Douglas James Baker (age 15) and Jason Eldridge (age 27) were killed in the incident, one of the largest multi-vehicle collisions in U.S. history, which was blamed on heavy fog." needs to be split.
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- Citations needed for "(As of 2007, I-67 is the largest odd number not in use.)" and "but it would be some time before I-96 was finished into the city."
- Removed that completely in the first case and repeated a cite in the second. Imzadi 1979 → 02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- Reference 18 is coming up with a 403 error.
- Only in the automated tool. Try loading it directly, and it works fine. Imzadi 1979 → 02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- Citations needed for "(As of 2007, I-67 is the largest odd number not in use.)" and "but it would be some time before I-96 was finished into the city."
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- "The segment from Livonia east is also the Jeffries Freeway, named for a former mayor of Detroit." - You should indicate who the former mayor is.
- The route description should include more details about interchanges. It seems like some highways the road interchanges with are not mentioned in the route description.
- That's what we have the exit list for. Most of the interchanges with the major state highways are already directly mentioned in the RD. Imzadi 1979 → 02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- I do not see the need for a brief overview of the history at the beginning of the history.
- I like it so that it isn't L2 header followed immediately by an L3 subheader, and it it's not doing any harm. Imzadi 1979 → 02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
I will put the article on hold for some fixes to be made. Dough 48 72 02:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- I will now pass the article. Dough 48 72 02:52, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Dough4872 ( talk · contribs) 02:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (
MoS):
- The sentence "Two people, Douglas James Baker (age 15) and Jason Eldridge (age 27) were killed in the incident, one of the largest multi-vehicle collisions in U.S. history, which was blamed on heavy fog." needs to be split.
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- Citations needed for "(As of 2007, I-67 is the largest odd number not in use.)" and "but it would be some time before I-96 was finished into the city."
- Removed that completely in the first case and repeated a cite in the second. Imzadi 1979 → 02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- Reference 18 is coming up with a 403 error.
- Only in the automated tool. Try loading it directly, and it works fine. Imzadi 1979 → 02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- Citations needed for "(As of 2007, I-67 is the largest odd number not in use.)" and "but it would be some time before I-96 was finished into the city."
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- "The segment from Livonia east is also the Jeffries Freeway, named for a former mayor of Detroit." - You should indicate who the former mayor is.
- The route description should include more details about interchanges. It seems like some highways the road interchanges with are not mentioned in the route description.
- That's what we have the exit list for. Most of the interchanges with the major state highways are already directly mentioned in the RD. Imzadi 1979 → 02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- I do not see the need for a brief overview of the history at the beginning of the history.
- I like it so that it isn't L2 header followed immediately by an L3 subheader, and it it's not doing any harm. Imzadi 1979 → 02:49, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
I will put the article on hold for some fixes to be made. Dough 48 72 02:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- I will now pass the article. Dough 48 72 02:52, 31 July 2012 (UTC)