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GA Review

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Reviewer: Dough4872 ( talk · contribs) 02:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC) reply

GA review (see here for criteria)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b ( MoS):
    • The sentence "Two people, Douglas James Baker (age 15) and Jason Eldridge (age 27) were killed in the incident, one of the largest multi-vehicle collisions in U.S. history, which was blamed on heavy fog." needs to be split.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    • "The segment from Livonia east is also the Jeffries Freeway, named for a former mayor of Detroit." - You should indicate who the former mayor is.
    • The route description should include more details about interchanges. It seems like some highways the road interchanges with are not mentioned in the route description.
    • I do not see the need for a brief overview of the history at the beginning of the history.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

I will put the article on hold for some fixes to be made. Dough 48 72 02:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC) reply

I will now pass the article. Dough 48 72 02:52, 31 July 2012 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Dough4872 ( talk · contribs) 02:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC) reply

GA review (see here for criteria)

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b ( MoS):
    • The sentence "Two people, Douglas James Baker (age 15) and Jason Eldridge (age 27) were killed in the incident, one of the largest multi-vehicle collisions in U.S. history, which was blamed on heavy fog." needs to be split.
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c ( OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
    • "The segment from Livonia east is also the Jeffries Freeway, named for a former mayor of Detroit." - You should indicate who the former mayor is.
    • The route description should include more details about interchanges. It seems like some highways the road interchanges with are not mentioned in the route description.
    • I do not see the need for a brief overview of the history at the beginning of the history.
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

I will put the article on hold for some fixes to be made. Dough 48 72 02:23, 31 July 2012 (UTC) reply

I will now pass the article. Dough 48 72 02:52, 31 July 2012 (UTC) reply

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