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Otto Ernst Remer and July 20 plot

How about the roles of Otto Ernst Remer in the July 20 plot?--  Matthead  discuß!      O       19:42, 21 July 2007 (UTC) reply

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Pancevo

Hi, I would like to reword this paragraph, to clarify that the reference/source describes the events in Pancevo. Right now the paragraph is structured in such a way that the ref seems to support the statement that "...film of the executions were used decades after the event to help chronicle the Wehrmacht's complicity..."

Original:
On 22 April 1941, soldiers of the Infantry Regiment Grossdeutschland committed a war crime in the town cemetery of Pančevo when 35 men and one woman were executed as a reprisal for the deaths of four German soldiers. Propaganda photos and film of the executions were used decades after the event to help chronicle the Wehrmacht's complicity in German atrocities during the war.[1]
Suggested:
On 22 April 1941, soldiers of the Infantry Regiment Grossdeutschland committed a war crime in the town cemetery of Pančevo when 35 men and one woman were executed as a reprisal for the deaths of four German soldiers.[1]

This is clearer.

Thoughts? K.e.coffman ( talk) 20:55, 21 November 2015 (UTC) reply

Recent edit

Preserving here by providing this link. My rationale was: "non RS & not used for citations; excessive and uncited orbat; excessive intricate detail". Please let me know if there are any concerns. -- K.e.coffman ( talk) 00:41, 28 March 2018 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Otto Ernst Remer and July 20 plot

How about the roles of Otto Ernst Remer in the July 20 plot?--  Matthead  discuß!      O       19:42, 21 July 2007 (UTC) reply

Fair use rationale for Images

Cuffti3.gif BetacommandBot 23:27, 2 June 2007 (UTC) reply

Cuffti.gif BetacommandBot 23:28, 2 June 2007 (UTC) reply
Cuffti.gif BetacommandBot ( talk) 20:55, 13 February 2008 (UTC) reply
Cuffti3.gif BetacommandBot ( talk) 20:57, 13 February 2008 (UTC) reply

Pancevo

Hi, I would like to reword this paragraph, to clarify that the reference/source describes the events in Pancevo. Right now the paragraph is structured in such a way that the ref seems to support the statement that "...film of the executions were used decades after the event to help chronicle the Wehrmacht's complicity..."

Original:
On 22 April 1941, soldiers of the Infantry Regiment Grossdeutschland committed a war crime in the town cemetery of Pančevo when 35 men and one woman were executed as a reprisal for the deaths of four German soldiers. Propaganda photos and film of the executions were used decades after the event to help chronicle the Wehrmacht's complicity in German atrocities during the war.[1]
Suggested:
On 22 April 1941, soldiers of the Infantry Regiment Grossdeutschland committed a war crime in the town cemetery of Pančevo when 35 men and one woman were executed as a reprisal for the deaths of four German soldiers.[1]

This is clearer.

Thoughts? K.e.coffman ( talk) 20:55, 21 November 2015 (UTC) reply

Recent edit

Preserving here by providing this link. My rationale was: "non RS & not used for citations; excessive and uncited orbat; excessive intricate detail". Please let me know if there are any concerns. -- K.e.coffman ( talk) 00:41, 28 March 2018 (UTC) reply


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