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was inaugurated the 21st President of the United States.— my reading of MOS:JOBTITLE is that president should not be capitalized.
Chief Justice of the United States Morrison Waite— Is there a way to avoid WP:SOB
Arthur was the fourth vice president to ascend to the presidency after their running mate's death— 'running mate' is bit misleading. Better just say 'president'. Also, 'their' should be 'his'.
his Cabinet— lowercase 'c'
by his citizenry— by the citizens
The first President of the United States— Lowercase per MOS:JOBTITLE
as Vice President for a deceased President— same
with the Wise Resolution— any link for that resolution?
Upon Zachary Taylor's 1850 death in office— should be "Upon Zachary Taylor's death in office in 1850".
while the Half-Breeds championed James G. Blaine's— can we make it a bit more neutral?
If New York's 35 electoral votes had gone to Hancock, he would have won the nomination— Nomination or presidency?
Garfield assassination— shouldn't it be "Garfield's assassination"
avoided traveling to Washington— DC or state?
including Arthur himself— remove 'himself'
his own assassination— remove 'own'
Arthur had never wanted the presidency, and he saw the vice presidency as his ultimate goal.— Did Arthur say this?
while the stock market, always unreliable, demonstrated a downward trend.— opinion represented as a fact. (Reliability/Unreliability is opinion; accuracy/inaccuracy is fact)
Arthur survived his travel— obviously. Do we need to mention?
Washington, D. C.and
Washington, D.C.(with and without space)
before Chief Justice of the United States Supreme Court Morrison Waite— Suggesting not to repeat 'United States' and even 'Supreme Court'
who fell to Grover Cleveland in— lost?
1884 United States presidential election— I'd remove 'United States'
– Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 10:40, 6 March 2022 (UTC)
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was inaugurated the 21st President of the United States.— my reading of MOS:JOBTITLE is that president should not be capitalized.
Chief Justice of the United States Morrison Waite— Is there a way to avoid WP:SOB
Arthur was the fourth vice president to ascend to the presidency after their running mate's death— 'running mate' is bit misleading. Better just say 'president'. Also, 'their' should be 'his'.
his Cabinet— lowercase 'c'
by his citizenry— by the citizens
The first President of the United States— Lowercase per MOS:JOBTITLE
as Vice President for a deceased President— same
with the Wise Resolution— any link for that resolution?
Upon Zachary Taylor's 1850 death in office— should be "Upon Zachary Taylor's death in office in 1850".
while the Half-Breeds championed James G. Blaine's— can we make it a bit more neutral?
If New York's 35 electoral votes had gone to Hancock, he would have won the nomination— Nomination or presidency?
Garfield assassination— shouldn't it be "Garfield's assassination"
avoided traveling to Washington— DC or state?
including Arthur himself— remove 'himself'
his own assassination— remove 'own'
Arthur had never wanted the presidency, and he saw the vice presidency as his ultimate goal.— Did Arthur say this?
while the stock market, always unreliable, demonstrated a downward trend.— opinion represented as a fact. (Reliability/Unreliability is opinion; accuracy/inaccuracy is fact)
Arthur survived his travel— obviously. Do we need to mention?
Washington, D. C.and
Washington, D.C.(with and without space)
before Chief Justice of the United States Supreme Court Morrison Waite— Suggesting not to repeat 'United States' and even 'Supreme Court'
who fell to Grover Cleveland in— lost?
1884 United States presidential election— I'd remove 'United States'
– Kavyansh.Singh ( talk) 10:40, 6 March 2022 (UTC)