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I will start to review this tomorrow, though it will not be a quick fail like "
I Still See Your Face" for sure. --
K. Peake 21:22, 12 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Thank you for your interest in reviewing. Just want to note that, even though I nominated the article, all credit goes to EditorE, he developed the article. I believe this meets the GA criteria, so I nominated it. Of course, if there are any problems, I will fix them.
GhostP.talk 23:00, 12 January 2021 (UTC)reply
GhostP.Wikipedia:Good article nominations/Instructions says, "Articles may be nominated by anyone, though it is highly preferable that they have contributed significantly to the article and are familiar with the subject." but that is not a guarantee and you are not that experienced with
under 500 edits, so I will still review this GAN. Bare what I said in mind for the future though, as you will be expected to significantly contribute to GANs once you've got more experience. --
K. Peake 07:51, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Infobox and lead
Change genre to
Electropop since that is sourced in the body, unlike synthwave
The stylization should be sourced somewhere in the body; a mention in the opening section would be ideal
The source is the album's own cover, I don't think any secondary source noted that the album is styled as "in decay." The album is officially known as "In Decay" on Spotify & other streaming services anyway, without using the stylized form, so I removed this sentence.
GhostP.talk 11:31, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Remove wikilink on electronic musician and target electronic to
Electronic music
"The record is a collection" → "It is a collection"
"before its release," → "prior to the release,"
"internet mixtape series Komputer Kasts" → "internet mixtape series, Komputer Kasts,"
"before the release of" → "before the release of his debut EP,"
"to define the Com Truise project." → "to define Com Truise."
"upon release was mixed overall;" → "upon release was mixed;"
"while a frequent criticism was its repetition and" → "while frequent criticisms were its repetition, and" since you have listed out more than one critcism
The second paragraph is only one sentence, so move that to the end of the opening para
"A second such compilation album," → "A follow-up compilation album,"
All errors were fixed.
GhostP.talk 11:31, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Track listing
Songwriting, production and album artwork by Seth Haley. → All songs written and produced by
Seth Haley. with the wikilink; artwork is not relevant to this section
All errors were fixed.
GhostP.talk 11:31, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; good luck with fixing them, even if you are not as knowledgeable as the editor that expanded this article! --
K. Peake 09:47, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Thank you for reviewing! All errors pointed by you were fixed.
GhostP.talk 11:31, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
GhostP. Looks good, apart from you having not changed the genre in the infobox, removed the italicisation on AllMusic in the body and removed the second wikilink on Stereogum. --
K. Peake 12:59, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Oops, forgot to fix those. Done.
GhostP.talk 14:17, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
GhostP. Just fixed two issues with ref 1 that I forgot to point out as still not being fixed, after my previous suggestions. ✓Pass now, kudos for getting through this quickly! --
K. Peake 14:22, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Albums, an attempt at building a useful resource on recordings from a variety of genres. If you would like to participate, visit the
project page, where you can join the project and/or contribute to the
discussion.AlbumsWikipedia:WikiProject AlbumsTemplate:WikiProject AlbumsAlbum articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Electronic music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Electronic music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Electronic musicWikipedia:WikiProject Electronic musicTemplate:WikiProject Electronic musicelectronic music articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Pop music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of articles related to
pop music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Pop musicWikipedia:WikiProject Pop musicTemplate:WikiProject Pop musicPop music articles
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
I will start to review this tomorrow, though it will not be a quick fail like "
I Still See Your Face" for sure. --
K. Peake 21:22, 12 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Thank you for your interest in reviewing. Just want to note that, even though I nominated the article, all credit goes to EditorE, he developed the article. I believe this meets the GA criteria, so I nominated it. Of course, if there are any problems, I will fix them.
GhostP.talk 23:00, 12 January 2021 (UTC)reply
GhostP.Wikipedia:Good article nominations/Instructions says, "Articles may be nominated by anyone, though it is highly preferable that they have contributed significantly to the article and are familiar with the subject." but that is not a guarantee and you are not that experienced with
under 500 edits, so I will still review this GAN. Bare what I said in mind for the future though, as you will be expected to significantly contribute to GANs once you've got more experience. --
K. Peake 07:51, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Infobox and lead
Change genre to
Electropop since that is sourced in the body, unlike synthwave
The stylization should be sourced somewhere in the body; a mention in the opening section would be ideal
The source is the album's own cover, I don't think any secondary source noted that the album is styled as "in decay." The album is officially known as "In Decay" on Spotify & other streaming services anyway, without using the stylized form, so I removed this sentence.
GhostP.talk 11:31, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Remove wikilink on electronic musician and target electronic to
Electronic music
"The record is a collection" → "It is a collection"
"before its release," → "prior to the release,"
"internet mixtape series Komputer Kasts" → "internet mixtape series, Komputer Kasts,"
"before the release of" → "before the release of his debut EP,"
"to define the Com Truise project." → "to define Com Truise."
"upon release was mixed overall;" → "upon release was mixed;"
"while a frequent criticism was its repetition and" → "while frequent criticisms were its repetition, and" since you have listed out more than one critcism
The second paragraph is only one sentence, so move that to the end of the opening para
"A second such compilation album," → "A follow-up compilation album,"
All errors were fixed.
GhostP.talk 11:31, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Track listing
Songwriting, production and album artwork by Seth Haley. → All songs written and produced by
Seth Haley. with the wikilink; artwork is not relevant to this section
All errors were fixed.
GhostP.talk 11:31, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; good luck with fixing them, even if you are not as knowledgeable as the editor that expanded this article! --
K. Peake 09:47, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Thank you for reviewing! All errors pointed by you were fixed.
GhostP.talk 11:31, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
GhostP. Looks good, apart from you having not changed the genre in the infobox, removed the italicisation on AllMusic in the body and removed the second wikilink on Stereogum. --
K. Peake 12:59, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
Oops, forgot to fix those. Done.
GhostP.talk 14:17, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply
GhostP. Just fixed two issues with ref 1 that I forgot to point out as still not being fixed, after my previous suggestions. ✓Pass now, kudos for getting through this quickly! --
K. Peake 14:22, 13 January 2021 (UTC)reply