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Is the originator able to cite a reference to qualify the following: 'where he impressed his peers with his keen intelligence and tireless energy', regarding his (Upjohn's) undergraduate years at Melbourne University? This would certainly add credibility to statement, as this appears to be a viewpoint as opposed to a verifiable fact. In the absence of such qualification I propose that this line should be deleted. ZorroChoco 04:47, 17 October 2007 (UTC) reply