Genre only includes R&B in infobox, but it lists adult contemporary, pop rock, and contemporary R&B as the genres in the "Composition" section
I mean't to remove R&B. No cited by reviewers. You only include a genre in the info box if a reviewer has stated it. Those three draws are what it draws influence from, as noted on Musicnotes.com. Therefore, not reviewers.
Aaron •
You Da One
Now there isn't any genre, which is needed by any song article.
Rp0211(talk2me)
Not if there isn't a sourced genre by a reviewer.
Aaron •
You Da One
Is there any source to verify that she recorded the song in 2007?
The album was released in 2007, and the album booklet has the song in it.
Aaron •
You Da One
It is a piano and guitar led song, and draws influence from the musical genres of Adult contemporary music, Pop rock and Contemporary R&B. → Change "and draws influence from the music genres of Adult contemporary music, Pop rock and Contemporary R&B" to "and draws influence from adult contemporary, pop rock, and contemporary R&B genres"
It garnered a mixed response from music critics; while some praised Lewis' vocal performance and delivery, others described it as emotionless. → Replace semicolon with comma; Replace "while some praised" with "with some critics praising..."; Add "while" in front of "others"
...including Conway Recording Studios, Los Angeles, CA; Henson Recording Studios, Hollywood, CA; Dr. Luke's personal recording studio in New York City; Opra Music, Hollywood CA; Ocean Way Recording, Hollywood, CA; Westlake Recording Studios, Los Angeles, CA; Atlantic Studios, Stockholm, Sweden; Sarm West, London, England. → Use commas as it is in a list; List the recording studios like "Conway Recording Studios in Los Angeles, Hensen Recording Studios in Hollywood..."
Comma's won't clearly separate them though. You're mean't to use a semi-colon.
Aaron •
You Da One
Composition
...which lasts for a duration of 3:58 (3 minutes, 58 seconds).[7] → Get rid of "3:58" and put "3 minutes, 58 seconds" out of parentheses
It incorporates elements of Adult contemporary music, Pop rock and Contemporary R&B genres.[6] → Change to "elements of adult contemporary, pop rock, and contemporary R&B genres"
Combine this section with the "Composition" section
They don't really go together. I made the Critical reception and Chart performance sections sub-sections under a Response section instead, as they go together more and it's more common to do that in articles.
Aaron •
You Da One22:43, 14 July 2012 (UTC)reply
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not concern good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
Rp0211(talk2me)20:28, 14 July 2012 (UTC)reply
Genre only includes R&B in infobox, but it lists adult contemporary, pop rock, and contemporary R&B as the genres in the "Composition" section
I mean't to remove R&B. No cited by reviewers. You only include a genre in the info box if a reviewer has stated it. Those three draws are what it draws influence from, as noted on Musicnotes.com. Therefore, not reviewers.
Aaron •
You Da One
Now there isn't any genre, which is needed by any song article.
Rp0211(talk2me)
Not if there isn't a sourced genre by a reviewer.
Aaron •
You Da One
Is there any source to verify that she recorded the song in 2007?
The album was released in 2007, and the album booklet has the song in it.
Aaron •
You Da One
It is a piano and guitar led song, and draws influence from the musical genres of Adult contemporary music, Pop rock and Contemporary R&B. → Change "and draws influence from the music genres of Adult contemporary music, Pop rock and Contemporary R&B" to "and draws influence from adult contemporary, pop rock, and contemporary R&B genres"
It garnered a mixed response from music critics; while some praised Lewis' vocal performance and delivery, others described it as emotionless. → Replace semicolon with comma; Replace "while some praised" with "with some critics praising..."; Add "while" in front of "others"
...including Conway Recording Studios, Los Angeles, CA; Henson Recording Studios, Hollywood, CA; Dr. Luke's personal recording studio in New York City; Opra Music, Hollywood CA; Ocean Way Recording, Hollywood, CA; Westlake Recording Studios, Los Angeles, CA; Atlantic Studios, Stockholm, Sweden; Sarm West, London, England. → Use commas as it is in a list; List the recording studios like "Conway Recording Studios in Los Angeles, Hensen Recording Studios in Hollywood..."
Comma's won't clearly separate them though. You're mean't to use a semi-colon.
Aaron •
You Da One
Composition
...which lasts for a duration of 3:58 (3 minutes, 58 seconds).[7] → Get rid of "3:58" and put "3 minutes, 58 seconds" out of parentheses
It incorporates elements of Adult contemporary music, Pop rock and Contemporary R&B genres.[6] → Change to "elements of adult contemporary, pop rock, and contemporary R&B genres"
Combine this section with the "Composition" section
They don't really go together. I made the Critical reception and Chart performance sections sub-sections under a Response section instead, as they go together more and it's more common to do that in articles.
Aaron •
You Da One22:43, 14 July 2012 (UTC)reply
After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put it on hold at this time. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or address issues which you believe do not concern good article status. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask.
Rp0211(talk2me)20:28, 14 July 2012 (UTC)reply