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What year was the song recorded? Done
Use {{Duration|m=3|s=30}} for the length parameter Done
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seventh studio album, Femme Fatale. → Put (2011) after Femme Fatale. Done
Spears first posted a snippet of the track in February 2011, prior to the album's release. → Posted a snippet where? Done
Following a poll on her official website in which fans could choose the third single of the album, "I Wanna Go" was announced as a single on May 13, 2011. → So this won the poll then? Done
reminiscent of
New Order → Who or what is New Order? Done
Spears' vocals are processed, and she squeals and stutters throughout the song. → Is this mean't to be here?! Done
low-key → low note, and no need to hypenate high note. Not done Till the World Ends is in the same style and the text is the same since it was reviewed.
"I Wanna Go" was remixed with guest vocals by Indian singer
Sonu Nigam and released on the
DesiHits website in June 2011. In the remix, Sonu mirrors Spears' vocals in
Hindi over
Indian instruments. Spears said about the song, "I'm so excited about having Sonu on I Wanna Go. His vocals add such a different feel, which I love! Watch out
Bollywood – it's Britney and Sonu!". → Is this all supported by that one source? Done Sources added.
On the week of → On the chart issue (Do this for all counts) Done
Should be Beyonce Knowles, not Beyonce the first time. Done
Knowles, not simply Beyonce. Done
On August 4, 2011, the song climbed to number nine → where??? Done
On August 4, 2011, the song climbed to number nine, making Femme Fatale the first album by Spears to achieve three top ten singles. → Source? Done
The song peaked atop the Pop Songs chart on September 24, 2011, becoming Spears' sixth single to top the chart, and setting a record for the longest span of number-one singles by an artist (12 years, seven months and four days). →Source? Done
Spears scored her first chart-topper with "...Baby One More Time" on the week of February 20, 1999. She also tied Mariah Carey and Beyoncé for the third-highest female total of number-one singles. → Source? Done
chart-topper → number one single on the chart Done
In Australia, "I Wanna Go" debuted at number thirty-three on the ARIA Singles Chart on the week of July 10, 2011. It peaked at number thirty-one three weeks later, on July 31, 2011. The song became the third lowest peaking single of Spears' career in the country, after "Radar" (2009) at forty-six and "From the Bottom of My Broken Heart" (1999) at thirty-seven. → Sources? Done
In New Zealand, the song debuted at number twenty-five on the official chart → The song debuted at number 25 on the
New Zealand Singles Chart Done
and peaked at number twenty-two the following week. → Source? Done
Where did it peak in Ireland? You only list the debut. Done
Music video (Development)
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Spears first contacted Marrs Piliero and asked him to put together a concept for the video. → Source?
He watched all of Spears' videos and wanted to pull what he loved from them, but also give it something fresh. → Who is "he"? Who are you referring to here?
Piliero had the concept nearly finished by the time he met with Spears.[45] Both wanted to explore fun ways for her to be inappropriate in the video.[44] Spears suggested different alternatives, including having the cop frisk her.[45] → These three sentences read awkwardly, they don't really flow from one to the next.
He also stated that the Crossroads (2002) reference "[i]s a fun Easter egg for fans. → Source?
Plus, Die Hard 2: Die Harder is the most ridiculously awesome way to title a sequel. It just felt like the right thing to do. When Britney saw it, she loved it."[44] → Have you forgotten to open the quote here? I don't understand what is happening here.
The quote includes those TWO SENTENCES: "[i]s a fun Easter egg for fans. Plus, Die Hard 2: Die Harder is the most ridiculously awesome way to title a sequel. It just felt like the right thing to do. When Britney saw it, she loved it.". -
SauloTalk to Me12:31, 7 January 2012 (UTC)reply
Music video (Synopsis)
Resolved comments
No issues. I did a c/e of the section, as it was easier than telling you what to change.
Music video (Release and reception)
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On June 17, 2011, Jive Records announced through a press release that an exclusive 30-second teaser would premiere on June 19, 2011, on Bravo's Watch What Happens: Live and on Vevo simultaneously. → Source?
"I Wanna Go" was first performed at 2011's Femme Fatale Tour. The song was performed after Spears sings a cover of Madonna's "Burning Up." Spears and her dancers bring fans onstage and dance with them throughout the performance. → Sources?
"I Wanna Go" was first performed at 2011's Femme Fatale Tour. → Though the song has never been performed live as part of a televised performance, "I Wanna Go" was featured on the set list of the
Femme Fatale Tour (2011).
The song was performed after Spears sings a cover of Madonna's "Burning Up." → Unless you can provide a reason as to why this is relevant, it should be removed.
This GAN has gone on for two months. You really should try and solve issues yourself when asked multiple times! This could have been passed weeks and weeks ago. I have corrected outstanding issues and the article is passed.
Aaron •
You Da One11:55, 8 February 2012 (UTC)reply
**Please put a Done next to every point you have amended, or put a Not done next to ones you have not done, with a reason.**
Info Box
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What year was the song recorded? Done
Use {{Duration|m=3|s=30}} for the length parameter Done
Lead
Resolved comments
seventh studio album, Femme Fatale. → Put (2011) after Femme Fatale. Done
Spears first posted a snippet of the track in February 2011, prior to the album's release. → Posted a snippet where? Done
Following a poll on her official website in which fans could choose the third single of the album, "I Wanna Go" was announced as a single on May 13, 2011. → So this won the poll then? Done
reminiscent of
New Order → Who or what is New Order? Done
Spears' vocals are processed, and she squeals and stutters throughout the song. → Is this mean't to be here?! Done
low-key → low note, and no need to hypenate high note. Not done Till the World Ends is in the same style and the text is the same since it was reviewed.
"I Wanna Go" was remixed with guest vocals by Indian singer
Sonu Nigam and released on the
DesiHits website in June 2011. In the remix, Sonu mirrors Spears' vocals in
Hindi over
Indian instruments. Spears said about the song, "I'm so excited about having Sonu on I Wanna Go. His vocals add such a different feel, which I love! Watch out
Bollywood – it's Britney and Sonu!". → Is this all supported by that one source? Done Sources added.
On the week of → On the chart issue (Do this for all counts) Done
Should be Beyonce Knowles, not Beyonce the first time. Done
Knowles, not simply Beyonce. Done
On August 4, 2011, the song climbed to number nine → where??? Done
On August 4, 2011, the song climbed to number nine, making Femme Fatale the first album by Spears to achieve three top ten singles. → Source? Done
The song peaked atop the Pop Songs chart on September 24, 2011, becoming Spears' sixth single to top the chart, and setting a record for the longest span of number-one singles by an artist (12 years, seven months and four days). →Source? Done
Spears scored her first chart-topper with "...Baby One More Time" on the week of February 20, 1999. She also tied Mariah Carey and Beyoncé for the third-highest female total of number-one singles. → Source? Done
chart-topper → number one single on the chart Done
In Australia, "I Wanna Go" debuted at number thirty-three on the ARIA Singles Chart on the week of July 10, 2011. It peaked at number thirty-one three weeks later, on July 31, 2011. The song became the third lowest peaking single of Spears' career in the country, after "Radar" (2009) at forty-six and "From the Bottom of My Broken Heart" (1999) at thirty-seven. → Sources? Done
In New Zealand, the song debuted at number twenty-five on the official chart → The song debuted at number 25 on the
New Zealand Singles Chart Done
and peaked at number twenty-two the following week. → Source? Done
Where did it peak in Ireland? You only list the debut. Done
Music video (Development)
Resolved comments
Spears first contacted Marrs Piliero and asked him to put together a concept for the video. → Source?
He watched all of Spears' videos and wanted to pull what he loved from them, but also give it something fresh. → Who is "he"? Who are you referring to here?
Piliero had the concept nearly finished by the time he met with Spears.[45] Both wanted to explore fun ways for her to be inappropriate in the video.[44] Spears suggested different alternatives, including having the cop frisk her.[45] → These three sentences read awkwardly, they don't really flow from one to the next.
He also stated that the Crossroads (2002) reference "[i]s a fun Easter egg for fans. → Source?
Plus, Die Hard 2: Die Harder is the most ridiculously awesome way to title a sequel. It just felt like the right thing to do. When Britney saw it, she loved it."[44] → Have you forgotten to open the quote here? I don't understand what is happening here.
The quote includes those TWO SENTENCES: "[i]s a fun Easter egg for fans. Plus, Die Hard 2: Die Harder is the most ridiculously awesome way to title a sequel. It just felt like the right thing to do. When Britney saw it, she loved it.". -
SauloTalk to Me12:31, 7 January 2012 (UTC)reply
Music video (Synopsis)
Resolved comments
No issues. I did a c/e of the section, as it was easier than telling you what to change.
Music video (Release and reception)
Resolved comments
On June 17, 2011, Jive Records announced through a press release that an exclusive 30-second teaser would premiere on June 19, 2011, on Bravo's Watch What Happens: Live and on Vevo simultaneously. → Source?
"I Wanna Go" was first performed at 2011's Femme Fatale Tour. The song was performed after Spears sings a cover of Madonna's "Burning Up." Spears and her dancers bring fans onstage and dance with them throughout the performance. → Sources?
"I Wanna Go" was first performed at 2011's Femme Fatale Tour. → Though the song has never been performed live as part of a televised performance, "I Wanna Go" was featured on the set list of the
Femme Fatale Tour (2011).
The song was performed after Spears sings a cover of Madonna's "Burning Up." → Unless you can provide a reason as to why this is relevant, it should be removed.
This GAN has gone on for two months. You really should try and solve issues yourself when asked multiple times! This could have been passed weeks and weeks ago. I have corrected outstanding issues and the article is passed.
Aaron •
You Da One11:55, 8 February 2012 (UTC)reply