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"I Did It, Mama!" is a song recorded by Romanian recording artist → recorded, recording...replace "recording artist" with singer-songwriter.
for her eponymous second studio album, Alesta (2016). → which one was the first?
I'm not getting this at all. Isn't it her fourth album overall? Which one was the first eponymous album?
David Ciente, while the writing → David Ciente. The writing (sentence is too long, any other suggestion is acceptance after I see it.)
the recording → the record.
What did the reviewers said regarding this song? Mixed opinion, positive, criticism?
Should include the chart peak.
"I Did It, Mama!" was met with negative to positive reviews, with music critics calling it catchy "an earworm" and "great", and others naming it "boring" and not radio-friendly. →...it was met with mixed reviews? Link music critics. Rephrase the rest of the sentence. Did any critic called it catchy or are those your words?
Composition and lyrical interpretation
confessed about the song that → doesn't flow properly
She as well named → She has, as well, named
Done
Critical response
Flawless.
Music video and promotion
The first paragraph should come as the third and the last, since the name of the section is "Music video and promotion".
where it has since amassed over 11 million views → remove this, is not a milestone.
"Stan particularly confessed about it that" → Stan particularly confessed that
"recommending its watching" → I don't like how it sounds, rephrase.
Romanian tabloids Cancan and Click! → tabloids are not a reliable source, can't you find others?
Well, after I made a research, I now know these aren't tabloids; they're newspapers. And no, I can't find other sites talking about this.
Just replace the word "tabloids" for newspapers and wiki link it.
commending that → commending
Done
Credits and personnel
"Bogdan Daragiu – director" of what?
link "director of photography"
Done
Track listing
Archive our found the archives to those links. Itunes is great but they tend to "die" every now and then.
Done
Charts
col-begin; col-2 → What are these templates doing there?
Secondly, why do I have an audio file instead of a website with the charts positions? It should be compiled with the podcast templates parameters. See:
Template:Cite podcast.
Done
Release and radio history
Radio history it's part of the promotion so no need for that.
Needs prose regarding everything. Maybe a new section called "release and promotion"?
I think this is not needed, as the single was released on almost the same dates worldwide. If I would create this section, then it would contain maybe max. 2-3 sentences, which would be too short.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
I Did It, Mama! is part of the Alesta series, a
good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the
Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it,
please do so.
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Alexandra Stan, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Alexandra Stan on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Alexandra StanWikipedia:WikiProject Alexandra StanTemplate:WikiProject Alexandra StanAlexandra Stan articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Electronic music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Electronic music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
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This article is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
"I Did It, Mama!" is a song recorded by Romanian recording artist → recorded, recording...replace "recording artist" with singer-songwriter.
for her eponymous second studio album, Alesta (2016). → which one was the first?
I'm not getting this at all. Isn't it her fourth album overall? Which one was the first eponymous album?
David Ciente, while the writing → David Ciente. The writing (sentence is too long, any other suggestion is acceptance after I see it.)
the recording → the record.
What did the reviewers said regarding this song? Mixed opinion, positive, criticism?
Should include the chart peak.
"I Did It, Mama!" was met with negative to positive reviews, with music critics calling it catchy "an earworm" and "great", and others naming it "boring" and not radio-friendly. →...it was met with mixed reviews? Link music critics. Rephrase the rest of the sentence. Did any critic called it catchy or are those your words?
Composition and lyrical interpretation
confessed about the song that → doesn't flow properly
She as well named → She has, as well, named
Done
Critical response
Flawless.
Music video and promotion
The first paragraph should come as the third and the last, since the name of the section is "Music video and promotion".
where it has since amassed over 11 million views → remove this, is not a milestone.
"Stan particularly confessed about it that" → Stan particularly confessed that
"recommending its watching" → I don't like how it sounds, rephrase.
Romanian tabloids Cancan and Click! → tabloids are not a reliable source, can't you find others?
Well, after I made a research, I now know these aren't tabloids; they're newspapers. And no, I can't find other sites talking about this.
Just replace the word "tabloids" for newspapers and wiki link it.
commending that → commending
Done
Credits and personnel
"Bogdan Daragiu – director" of what?
link "director of photography"
Done
Track listing
Archive our found the archives to those links. Itunes is great but they tend to "die" every now and then.
Done
Charts
col-begin; col-2 → What are these templates doing there?
Secondly, why do I have an audio file instead of a website with the charts positions? It should be compiled with the podcast templates parameters. See:
Template:Cite podcast.
Done
Release and radio history
Radio history it's part of the promotion so no need for that.
Needs prose regarding everything. Maybe a new section called "release and promotion"?
I think this is not needed, as the single was released on almost the same dates worldwide. If I would create this section, then it would contain maybe max. 2-3 sentences, which would be too short.
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.