" bounty hunter droid" sea of blue. I thought it would link to an article about bounty hunter droids.
I wasn't sure how to resolve this without eliminating one of the wikilinks, so I removed the link to "bounty hunter" and kept the one for "droid". —
HunterKahn13:56, 13 April 2020 (UTC)reply
" an alien known" alien links to "extraterrestrial" but aren't pretty much all characters in Star Wars therefore alien?
"outlawed in the galaxy." throughout the galaxy (and which galaxy?)
Well, the answer is the galaxy that Star Wars is set in, which doesn't have an actual name, which is why I just went with "the galaxy". LOL But to avoid confusion, I just removed "in the galaxy" from this sentence. —
HunterKahn13:56, 13 April 2020 (UTC)reply
"In his first appearance on the show, IG-11" I don't think "on the show" is required.
Reworded the second one; I think the other two are unavoidable because one identifies the Guild by its proper name, and the other identifies the profession of the Mandalorian. —
HunterKahn13:56, 13 April 2020 (UTC)reply
"the asset to " first use of "asset", it's not clear this means the "unidentified living being" noted earlier.
Instead of doing this, I just changed "MCU" to "Marvel" so we wouldn't need to establish the acronym, if this works for you? —
HunterKahn13:56, 13 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Link MVP, this isn't a common term outside the US.
" bounty hunter droid" sea of blue. I thought it would link to an article about bounty hunter droids.
I wasn't sure how to resolve this without eliminating one of the wikilinks, so I removed the link to "bounty hunter" and kept the one for "droid". —
HunterKahn13:56, 13 April 2020 (UTC)reply
" an alien known" alien links to "extraterrestrial" but aren't pretty much all characters in Star Wars therefore alien?
"outlawed in the galaxy." throughout the galaxy (and which galaxy?)
Well, the answer is the galaxy that Star Wars is set in, which doesn't have an actual name, which is why I just went with "the galaxy". LOL But to avoid confusion, I just removed "in the galaxy" from this sentence. —
HunterKahn13:56, 13 April 2020 (UTC)reply
"In his first appearance on the show, IG-11" I don't think "on the show" is required.
Reworded the second one; I think the other two are unavoidable because one identifies the Guild by its proper name, and the other identifies the profession of the Mandalorian. —
HunterKahn13:56, 13 April 2020 (UTC)reply
"the asset to " first use of "asset", it's not clear this means the "unidentified living being" noted earlier.
Instead of doing this, I just changed "MCU" to "Marvel" so we wouldn't need to establish the acronym, if this works for you? —
HunterKahn13:56, 13 April 2020 (UTC)reply
Link MVP, this isn't a common term outside the US.