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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 ( talk · contribs) 07:59, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
I plan on reviewing this article later this week. My preliminary comment is to add sub-section headers to the history section.
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07:59, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
Some recurring problems with the prose I see are...
@ BlueSwede92: My first impression is that overall the article looks like it's on track. I left a first set of comments on some general issues. Sportsfan77777 ( talk) 21:38, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
@ BlueSwede92: Okay, looks better now! I added comments on the History section. Most of them are minor and very specific.
The most major comment I have content-wise is that there are times when you don't talk about the accomplishments of the players enough. This isn't so relevant when the club is struggling, but I would suggest mentioning the key players when the club is doing well. Related to this, the times the article does mention players, it almost always only mentions their names. You can also add things like what positions they played when it is relevant. Or better yet, if several players combined to form a good defense or a good offense. Also, you can mention if a player led the league in goals (or something else important).
The article on Arsenal F.C. is a good example in how it doesn't introduce players too often, but still introduces them with detail. For example, in the 1988–2018 section, it states (1) "By 1988, new signings Nigel Winterburn, Lee Dixon and Steve Bould had joined the club to complete the "famous Back Four" led by existing player Tony Adams."; and later (2) "Accumulating key players from Wenger's homeland, such as Patrick Vieira and Thierry Henry, Arsenal won a second League and Cup double in 1997–98 and a third in 2001–02."; (3) "The club had not gained a major trophy since the 2005 FA Cup until 17 May 2014 when, spearheaded by then club-record acquisition Mesut Özil, Arsenal beat Hull City in the 2014 FA Cup Final, coming back from a 2–0 deficit to win the match 3–2." And those three instances are the only player mentions in the entire four-paragraph sub-section.
You already do this well in some places like "The 1970s was the first time that the club featured a significant number of players from outside the Kristianstad area, including Thomas Persson, Einar Jakobsson and Lars-Göran Jönsson." The place where it is missing the most is in the Second Golden Era, where you also have the issue of listing too many playoff results again.
Here are the more specific comments:
I'll hold off on the other sections for now.
@ BlueSwede92: The history section looks pretty good. I did a little copyediting. You can check what changes I made. Here are my comments on the remaining sections:
Overall, I don't see anything major.
Looks good. Passed! Sportsfan77777 ( talk) 16:36, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
Sportsfan77777 and BlueSwede92: This was recently promoted to GA, but I noticed that most of the sources are incomplete (i.e. lacking publisher, published date, etc.). Please fix this immediately if you can. Doing this prevents link rot. Let me know if you have any questions or how I provide further assistance. MX ( ✉ • ✎) 14:43, 6 September 2018 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 ( talk · contribs) 07:59, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
I plan on reviewing this article later this week. My preliminary comment is to add sub-section headers to the history section.
Sportsfan77777 (
talk)
07:59, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
Some recurring problems with the prose I see are...
@ BlueSwede92: My first impression is that overall the article looks like it's on track. I left a first set of comments on some general issues. Sportsfan77777 ( talk) 21:38, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
@ BlueSwede92: Okay, looks better now! I added comments on the History section. Most of them are minor and very specific.
The most major comment I have content-wise is that there are times when you don't talk about the accomplishments of the players enough. This isn't so relevant when the club is struggling, but I would suggest mentioning the key players when the club is doing well. Related to this, the times the article does mention players, it almost always only mentions their names. You can also add things like what positions they played when it is relevant. Or better yet, if several players combined to form a good defense or a good offense. Also, you can mention if a player led the league in goals (or something else important).
The article on Arsenal F.C. is a good example in how it doesn't introduce players too often, but still introduces them with detail. For example, in the 1988–2018 section, it states (1) "By 1988, new signings Nigel Winterburn, Lee Dixon and Steve Bould had joined the club to complete the "famous Back Four" led by existing player Tony Adams."; and later (2) "Accumulating key players from Wenger's homeland, such as Patrick Vieira and Thierry Henry, Arsenal won a second League and Cup double in 1997–98 and a third in 2001–02."; (3) "The club had not gained a major trophy since the 2005 FA Cup until 17 May 2014 when, spearheaded by then club-record acquisition Mesut Özil, Arsenal beat Hull City in the 2014 FA Cup Final, coming back from a 2–0 deficit to win the match 3–2." And those three instances are the only player mentions in the entire four-paragraph sub-section.
You already do this well in some places like "The 1970s was the first time that the club featured a significant number of players from outside the Kristianstad area, including Thomas Persson, Einar Jakobsson and Lars-Göran Jönsson." The place where it is missing the most is in the Second Golden Era, where you also have the issue of listing too many playoff results again.
Here are the more specific comments:
I'll hold off on the other sections for now.
@ BlueSwede92: The history section looks pretty good. I did a little copyediting. You can check what changes I made. Here are my comments on the remaining sections:
Overall, I don't see anything major.
Looks good. Passed! Sportsfan77777 ( talk) 16:36, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
Sportsfan77777 and BlueSwede92: This was recently promoted to GA, but I noticed that most of the sources are incomplete (i.e. lacking publisher, published date, etc.). Please fix this immediately if you can. Doing this prevents link rot. Let me know if you have any questions or how I provide further assistance. MX ( ✉ • ✎) 14:43, 6 September 2018 (UTC)