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Reviewer: Dedhert.Jr ( talk · contribs) 12:29, 24 December 2023 (UTC)
Reviewing. Dedhert.Jr ( talk) 12:29, 24 December 2023 (UTC)
Started from the lead: Why do you need to cite the fact stating it is viewed up as a spiral staircase, whereas you already cite it in the "Central projection of a helix"? Also, is it possible to put this fact in the "History and applications"?
History and applications: Some comments or questions regarding this section. Is there any reason not to link Polar curve, or is it just a coincidence that you forgot to put that link? Also, since the third paragraph mentions the polar equation of a hyperbolic spiral, can you put it after the section "Construction" (or "Property"), in order to make the readers understand the equation first? The hyperbolic spiral may also be applied in psychological experiments, and I wonder what are those. The link "Architecture" may not be helpful, as it is just literally the architecture, art and technique of design and building.
Construction: In "Cartesian coordinate", the phrase "However, one can obtain a trigonometric equation", does the word "one" count as the weasel word of pronoun, as it refers to someone, as far as I'm concerned? In the same section, do you have a link about the term "branch"? I'm asking because I think that some readers who want to understand this topic may not comprehend some mathematical terms (or some people say it jargon???). The same reason for the "image" in the phrase "the image of Archimedean spiral" in the subsection "Inversion".
Properties: Just asking here. Do you need the formula in the "Curvature"? From my perspective, it may cause some confusion with the unfamiliar technical symbols. Nevermind, I didn't see that it represents a function, which may be used for its derivatives applying in the formula. For the "Arc length", I do think that the vdots may be useless for portraiting them to the readers, and maybe some calculations can be simplified and spit out the results; do you actually need it?
The article is well-written, with some kind of technical terms that may need attention (GACR#1a). I believe there is no original research in this article; every section is filled with reliable sources but with some little copyvio here (GACR2) The article is broad in its coverage (GACR3). Neutral and no edit war (GACR4 and GACR5). The article has pictures or images illustrating the text in every paragraph, together with the captions (GACR6).
I think that's all for today. If you have any questions or complete all of these tasks, please ping me, and I may respond swiftly. If there is something wrong with my suggestions, please warn me and I will try to understand more. Thank you Dedhert.Jr ( talk) 13:17, 24 December 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Dedhert.Jr ( talk · contribs) 12:29, 24 December 2023 (UTC)
Reviewing. Dedhert.Jr ( talk) 12:29, 24 December 2023 (UTC)
Started from the lead: Why do you need to cite the fact stating it is viewed up as a spiral staircase, whereas you already cite it in the "Central projection of a helix"? Also, is it possible to put this fact in the "History and applications"?
History and applications: Some comments or questions regarding this section. Is there any reason not to link Polar curve, or is it just a coincidence that you forgot to put that link? Also, since the third paragraph mentions the polar equation of a hyperbolic spiral, can you put it after the section "Construction" (or "Property"), in order to make the readers understand the equation first? The hyperbolic spiral may also be applied in psychological experiments, and I wonder what are those. The link "Architecture" may not be helpful, as it is just literally the architecture, art and technique of design and building.
Construction: In "Cartesian coordinate", the phrase "However, one can obtain a trigonometric equation", does the word "one" count as the weasel word of pronoun, as it refers to someone, as far as I'm concerned? In the same section, do you have a link about the term "branch"? I'm asking because I think that some readers who want to understand this topic may not comprehend some mathematical terms (or some people say it jargon???). The same reason for the "image" in the phrase "the image of Archimedean spiral" in the subsection "Inversion".
Properties: Just asking here. Do you need the formula in the "Curvature"? From my perspective, it may cause some confusion with the unfamiliar technical symbols. Nevermind, I didn't see that it represents a function, which may be used for its derivatives applying in the formula. For the "Arc length", I do think that the vdots may be useless for portraiting them to the readers, and maybe some calculations can be simplified and spit out the results; do you actually need it?
The article is well-written, with some kind of technical terms that may need attention (GACR#1a). I believe there is no original research in this article; every section is filled with reliable sources but with some little copyvio here (GACR2) The article is broad in its coverage (GACR3). Neutral and no edit war (GACR4 and GACR5). The article has pictures or images illustrating the text in every paragraph, together with the captions (GACR6).
I think that's all for today. If you have any questions or complete all of these tasks, please ping me, and I may respond swiftly. If there is something wrong with my suggestions, please warn me and I will try to understand more. Thank you Dedhert.Jr ( talk) 13:17, 24 December 2023 (UTC)