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This article was approaching 50k in size and repeated a lot of things over and over again, it had unneeded elaborations on very little things and it appeared to be written like an essay.
Please help me with this, opioid articles appear to suffer from the highest amount of this (sometimes I find articles with no sections and walls and walls of text.) I just got finished cleaning dihydromorphine. Best regards, C6541 ( T↔ C) 22:54, 3 November 2012 (UTC)
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The structural picture is of morphine, not hydromorphone. Darth Woden ( talk) 20:41, 27 July 2016 (UTC)
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This sentence uses inconsistent units to describe the amount of the drugs:
"The hydrochloride salt is soluble in three parts of water, whereas a gram of morphine hydrochloride dissolves in 16 ml of water;"
What is "three parts of water"? Maybe that's clear to someone who dispenses drugs, but not to ordinary folks like me -- why not use grams per ml for both salts? -- Dough34 ( talk) 15:37, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
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The structural picture is of morphine, not hydromorphone. Darth Woden ( talk) 20:41, 27 July 2016 (UTC)
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