as the second, third and fourth singles, respectively. → see below on "Release and promotion" section as I have some doubts
Background
which began in March 2018 → when it ended?
Writing and collaborations
RE-TITLE the section to "Development and composition"
Title and artwork
This should be incorporated in the background section
Music and lyrical interpretation
The caption of the picture doesn't nothing at all → remove it
Malvika Padin of Clash labelled it "a collection of anthemic pop tracks threaded through with her bold vocals". → Critical Reception
Written by Pink, Jorgen Odegard, and Dan Reynolds, → remove
Remove the writers/procuders from all the sentences they don't add anything to this section
Wrabel appears on the next song → how he appears? as a songwriter? featured guest?
The sixth song, and the title track, appears next, and features Khalid. → The title track, which appears next, features Khalid and...
The seventh track and the second single, "Can We Pretend", → need to mention the featured guest
in collaboration with Chris Stapleton → he is a feature guest
Release and promotion
No awards or nominations for "Walk Me Home"?
The following month, it was released as a radio single in Australia → it sounds like it was only released in Austrlia
"On April 11, "Can We Pretend" was released as the second promotional single.[56] The following month, it was released as a radio single in Australia" → "Can We Pretend" was first released as the second promotional single, on April 11.[56] On the following month, it was released as the second official single
"Hurts 2B Human" was released to radio in selected territories → "Hurts 2B Human" was released in selected territories. (Stop calling them radio singles)
"Love Me Anyway" was further serviced to country and adult contemporary radio on September 17 as the fourth and final single from Hurts 2B Human → "Love Me Anyway" was serviced to country and adult contemporary radio in the United States on September 17 as the final single from Hurts 2B Human.
Critical reception
Add AnyDencetMusic, is simmlar to Metacritic in its use.
1
and felt → and believed
Giving it a rating of "B", Maura Johnston of Entertainment Weekly commented → Maura Johnston of Entertainment Weekly, who gave the album a "B" rating, commented
While reviewing the album along with Lizzo's Cuz I Love You (2019) → remove, irrelevant to the topic
comparing the latter with her second studio album → regarding what?
Beautiful Trauma → release year?
and calling Hurts → and called Hurts
In a mixed review for Slant Magazine → In a negative review for Slant Magazine (she gave the album 2,5 out of five starts, its below average)
Commercial performance
ranked number two on the Top Album Sales chart with pure album sales of 95,000 copies (83% of overall units) → with pure album sales of 95,000 copies
The release also saw Pink rise from number seventeen to number one on the Billboard Artist 100 chart, which measures artist activity across the publication's most influential charts → remove it, this chart has a different metolodogy and even includes wiki searches
Silver, Gold → silver, gold
Update the ARIA certification since now is platinum
Track listing
Total length with the bonus track?
Personnel
This section is very confusing
This how you should do it (Pink - lead vocals, background vocals, executive production, production). So you cite the name and everyhting the person did
New name for the first and second subsection "Technical and composing credits^"
Amazon.com, AllMusic, (IFPI → International Federation of the Phonographic Industry), Today, Idolator, The Music Network Australia, Dolfijn FM, VideoStatic, Entertainment Tonight, Metacritic, Official Charts Company, Apple Music, CD Japan, Gaon Chart and iTunes Store → publisher
The New York Times, Entertainment Weekly → wikilink
Doesn't strike me as one. First thinghs first, the writer is still finishing is digree in journalism and has written mostly for the magazine of his school, secondly he has in fact writen for NME but it was for the blog and final but not the least anyone can write for Celebmix as long as they are "passionate about celebrities, music, entertainment or YouTubers". They claim "CelebMix has strict editorial standards and all content is reviewed and verified by a team of trained entertainment journalists before publication", but give no names to verify such information. Better to remove it, what GA's have this source?
Reference 57 is missing publisher
WhiskeyRiff doesn't strike me as a reliable source
I found "
https://daily.plaympe.com/pnk-feat-chris-stapleton-love-me-anyway-2/". The source is reliable as I mentioned to two other editors. "Play MPE states "Since the official launch in October 2003 over 60,300 users and over 800,700 songs from more than 2,700 record labels, including Universal Music Group, Warner Music Group, Sony Music and EMI Music Group, Destiny’s Play MPE® system is the most widely used digital distribution system available to the recording and radio industries."
[1]. Various record labels that TRUST the website, including Warner, Sony and Universal. Moreover, Charles DeFranco, who is Warner Records, Manager, Promotion Operations, said "Play MPE is our go-to service for getting our content to reach the radio community. It’s a great product, they provide great customer service and their distribution lists provide excellent reach to expose our artists to a broader audience."
General."
Reference 103 is not well formated
Dates not consisting "2019-05-02"
austriancharts.at., dutchcharts.nl and hitparade.ch. → not well formated
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Gabrielflorin01: I added two comments and fixes, please address them.
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Gabrielflorin01: there is one source with more than one publisher, you need to remove the one that is wrong. Who mixed the rest of the album and by the way who mastered the album?
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MarioSoulTruthFan: From what I'm seeing from the album credits, it looks like the entire album was mixed by Serban Ghenea and engineered by John Hanes. Simon Gooding mixed "Walk Me Home", "90 Days", and "Love Me Anyway", Cash Cash mixed "Can We Pretend", and "The Last Song of Your Life" was mixed by billymann. The album was mastered by Dave Kutch at The Mastering Place, NYC. By the way, should I also add a subsection management and legal representation?;
Gabrielflorin01 (
talk)
05:45, 1 May 2020 (UTC)reply
as the second, third and fourth singles, respectively. → see below on "Release and promotion" section as I have some doubts
Background
which began in March 2018 → when it ended?
Writing and collaborations
RE-TITLE the section to "Development and composition"
Title and artwork
This should be incorporated in the background section
Music and lyrical interpretation
The caption of the picture doesn't nothing at all → remove it
Malvika Padin of Clash labelled it "a collection of anthemic pop tracks threaded through with her bold vocals". → Critical Reception
Written by Pink, Jorgen Odegard, and Dan Reynolds, → remove
Remove the writers/procuders from all the sentences they don't add anything to this section
Wrabel appears on the next song → how he appears? as a songwriter? featured guest?
The sixth song, and the title track, appears next, and features Khalid. → The title track, which appears next, features Khalid and...
The seventh track and the second single, "Can We Pretend", → need to mention the featured guest
in collaboration with Chris Stapleton → he is a feature guest
Release and promotion
No awards or nominations for "Walk Me Home"?
The following month, it was released as a radio single in Australia → it sounds like it was only released in Austrlia
"On April 11, "Can We Pretend" was released as the second promotional single.[56] The following month, it was released as a radio single in Australia" → "Can We Pretend" was first released as the second promotional single, on April 11.[56] On the following month, it was released as the second official single
"Hurts 2B Human" was released to radio in selected territories → "Hurts 2B Human" was released in selected territories. (Stop calling them radio singles)
"Love Me Anyway" was further serviced to country and adult contemporary radio on September 17 as the fourth and final single from Hurts 2B Human → "Love Me Anyway" was serviced to country and adult contemporary radio in the United States on September 17 as the final single from Hurts 2B Human.
Critical reception
Add AnyDencetMusic, is simmlar to Metacritic in its use.
1
and felt → and believed
Giving it a rating of "B", Maura Johnston of Entertainment Weekly commented → Maura Johnston of Entertainment Weekly, who gave the album a "B" rating, commented
While reviewing the album along with Lizzo's Cuz I Love You (2019) → remove, irrelevant to the topic
comparing the latter with her second studio album → regarding what?
Beautiful Trauma → release year?
and calling Hurts → and called Hurts
In a mixed review for Slant Magazine → In a negative review for Slant Magazine (she gave the album 2,5 out of five starts, its below average)
Commercial performance
ranked number two on the Top Album Sales chart with pure album sales of 95,000 copies (83% of overall units) → with pure album sales of 95,000 copies
The release also saw Pink rise from number seventeen to number one on the Billboard Artist 100 chart, which measures artist activity across the publication's most influential charts → remove it, this chart has a different metolodogy and even includes wiki searches
Silver, Gold → silver, gold
Update the ARIA certification since now is platinum
Track listing
Total length with the bonus track?
Personnel
This section is very confusing
This how you should do it (Pink - lead vocals, background vocals, executive production, production). So you cite the name and everyhting the person did
New name for the first and second subsection "Technical and composing credits^"
Amazon.com, AllMusic, (IFPI → International Federation of the Phonographic Industry), Today, Idolator, The Music Network Australia, Dolfijn FM, VideoStatic, Entertainment Tonight, Metacritic, Official Charts Company, Apple Music, CD Japan, Gaon Chart and iTunes Store → publisher
The New York Times, Entertainment Weekly → wikilink
Doesn't strike me as one. First thinghs first, the writer is still finishing is digree in journalism and has written mostly for the magazine of his school, secondly he has in fact writen for NME but it was for the blog and final but not the least anyone can write for Celebmix as long as they are "passionate about celebrities, music, entertainment or YouTubers". They claim "CelebMix has strict editorial standards and all content is reviewed and verified by a team of trained entertainment journalists before publication", but give no names to verify such information. Better to remove it, what GA's have this source?
Reference 57 is missing publisher
WhiskeyRiff doesn't strike me as a reliable source
I found "
https://daily.plaympe.com/pnk-feat-chris-stapleton-love-me-anyway-2/". The source is reliable as I mentioned to two other editors. "Play MPE states "Since the official launch in October 2003 over 60,300 users and over 800,700 songs from more than 2,700 record labels, including Universal Music Group, Warner Music Group, Sony Music and EMI Music Group, Destiny’s Play MPE® system is the most widely used digital distribution system available to the recording and radio industries."
[1]. Various record labels that TRUST the website, including Warner, Sony and Universal. Moreover, Charles DeFranco, who is Warner Records, Manager, Promotion Operations, said "Play MPE is our go-to service for getting our content to reach the radio community. It’s a great product, they provide great customer service and their distribution lists provide excellent reach to expose our artists to a broader audience."
General."
Reference 103 is not well formated
Dates not consisting "2019-05-02"
austriancharts.at., dutchcharts.nl and hitparade.ch. → not well formated
@
Gabrielflorin01: I added two comments and fixes, please address them.
@
Gabrielflorin01: there is one source with more than one publisher, you need to remove the one that is wrong. Who mixed the rest of the album and by the way who mastered the album?
@
MarioSoulTruthFan: From what I'm seeing from the album credits, it looks like the entire album was mixed by Serban Ghenea and engineered by John Hanes. Simon Gooding mixed "Walk Me Home", "90 Days", and "Love Me Anyway", Cash Cash mixed "Can We Pretend", and "The Last Song of Your Life" was mixed by billymann. The album was mastered by Dave Kutch at The Mastering Place, NYC. By the way, should I also add a subsection management and legal representation?;
Gabrielflorin01 (
talk)
05:45, 1 May 2020 (UTC)reply