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Reviewer: Wizardman ( talk · contribs) 02:41, 28 October 2011 (UTC) reply

Here are the issues I found:

  • "near Ciudad Constitución, in Mexico" that comma's not needed.
  • "Even though, the picture" same, no comma needed.
  • "October 1 was mostly not helpful due to another electronic problem, however," a semicolon after problem works better here.

Just a few punctuation things. Article's on hold and will be passed when done. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:41, 28 October 2011 (UTC) reply

All fixed. Thanks for the review. Y E Pacific Hurricane 02:58, 28 October 2011 (UTC) reply
Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:53, 28 October 2011 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

Article ( | visual edit | history) · Article talk ( | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Wizardman ( talk · contribs) 02:41, 28 October 2011 (UTC) reply

Here are the issues I found:

  • "near Ciudad Constitución, in Mexico" that comma's not needed.
  • "Even though, the picture" same, no comma needed.
  • "October 1 was mostly not helpful due to another electronic problem, however," a semicolon after problem works better here.

Just a few punctuation things. Article's on hold and will be passed when done. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:41, 28 October 2011 (UTC) reply

All fixed. Thanks for the review. Y E Pacific Hurricane 02:58, 28 October 2011 (UTC) reply
Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:53, 28 October 2011 (UTC) reply

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