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Arizona received an enhanced risk for severe weather today (9/23) with a 30% hatched risk. This is uncommon in Arizona and if significant severe weather does occur, a subsection should be added on it. -- INFOWeather1 ( talk) 19:44, 23 September 2019 (UTC)
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Lead
Lorena was the thirteenth named storm and seventh and final hurricane of the 2019 Pacific hurricane season.— Appears only in lead.
With increasing convection or thunderstorm development— Does the "or" mean that "thunderstorm development" is being equated to convection? Also, the term "convection" appears only in the lead.
Meteorological history
By 06:00 UTC September 17, the disturbance quickly improved in overall organization— "quickly" is a bit odd here, since it refers to a span of time, while the first clause suggests that the remainder of the sentence will be about one fixed moment in time.
was declared Tropical Storm Lorena— Who declared it so?
Jalisco
Tropical storm watches were issued— Who issued them?
During which time Lorena moved very close to the shorelines of the states of Colima and Jalisco during its first peak in strength.— Sentence fragment, and also confusing ("During ... during")
Colima
Governor of Colima, José Ignacio Peralta, stated that ... Further evaluation— When did Peralta make his statement/when was the further evaluation done?
There was a report— Who reported it?
Baja California Peninsula
in a very short period of time— "within days"?
Other states
Residents of Sonora prepared for torrential rainfall as Lorena approached as a tropical depression.— What day was this?
Arizona
More than 8,000 customers statewide lost electricity in the Phoenix area— If they were in just the Phoenix area, they weren't statewide.
A very rare phenomenon in the state also occured when an EF-1 tornado formed— Is the "very rare phenomenon" the formation of an EF-1 tornado?
A school bus was stranded in floodwaters with 120 children— 120 people on a school bus? Really?
brought aid to those in need— Any word on what type of (and how much) aid?
Overall
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![]() | Hurricane Lorena (2019) has been listed as one of the
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please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
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Arizona received an enhanced risk for severe weather today (9/23) with a 30% hatched risk. This is uncommon in Arizona and if significant severe weather does occur, a subsection should be added on it. -- INFOWeather1 ( talk) 19:44, 23 September 2019 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Usernameunique ( talk · contribs) 23:54, 28 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox
Lead
Lorena was the thirteenth named storm and seventh and final hurricane of the 2019 Pacific hurricane season.— Appears only in lead.
With increasing convection or thunderstorm development— Does the "or" mean that "thunderstorm development" is being equated to convection? Also, the term "convection" appears only in the lead.
Meteorological history
By 06:00 UTC September 17, the disturbance quickly improved in overall organization— "quickly" is a bit odd here, since it refers to a span of time, while the first clause suggests that the remainder of the sentence will be about one fixed moment in time.
was declared Tropical Storm Lorena— Who declared it so?
Jalisco
Tropical storm watches were issued— Who issued them?
During which time Lorena moved very close to the shorelines of the states of Colima and Jalisco during its first peak in strength.— Sentence fragment, and also confusing ("During ... during")
Colima
Governor of Colima, José Ignacio Peralta, stated that ... Further evaluation— When did Peralta make his statement/when was the further evaluation done?
There was a report— Who reported it?
Baja California Peninsula
in a very short period of time— "within days"?
Other states
Residents of Sonora prepared for torrential rainfall as Lorena approached as a tropical depression.— What day was this?
Arizona
More than 8,000 customers statewide lost electricity in the Phoenix area— If they were in just the Phoenix area, they weren't statewide.
A very rare phenomenon in the state also occured when an EF-1 tornado formed— Is the "very rare phenomenon" the formation of an EF-1 tornado?
A school bus was stranded in floodwaters with 120 children— 120 people on a school bus? Really?
brought aid to those in need— Any word on what type of (and how much) aid?
Overall
Comments from MarioJump83