"Winds over hurricane-force impacted numerous locations" - I think the word "over" should be removed and then first part be reworded because I don't think there's such a thing as winds stronger than hurricane force
"The storm was responsible for two deaths: one when a tree fell on a vehicle in County Durham, United Kingdom, and another during a multi-car accident on the M54 motorway resulting from adverse weather conditions" - You should probably say "The storm was responsible for two deaths in the United Kingdom:..." and removed United Kingdom after County Durham, so then it is immediately known that both deaths occurred in the UK
"In total, the post-tropical cyclone caused £100m ($122 million 2016 USD) in damage in the United Kingdom alone." - Is that the only damage toll? The infobox says $157 million USD (2011). Or is there a discrepancy because the USD totals are different years? Regardless of the reason, make them both 2011. Also, delink United Kingdom here if you follow through on the previous comment
"Guadeloupe for the potential of 3–5 meter (10–16 ft) swells.[13] Antigua and Barbuda recorded 0.85 inches (21.59 mm) of rainfall" - Why the switch in the order of the units?
"Winds over hurricane-force impacted numerous locations" - I think the word "over" should be removed and then first part be reworded because I don't think there's such a thing as winds stronger than hurricane force
"The storm was responsible for two deaths: one when a tree fell on a vehicle in County Durham, United Kingdom, and another during a multi-car accident on the M54 motorway resulting from adverse weather conditions" - You should probably say "The storm was responsible for two deaths in the United Kingdom:..." and removed United Kingdom after County Durham, so then it is immediately known that both deaths occurred in the UK
"In total, the post-tropical cyclone caused £100m ($122 million 2016 USD) in damage in the United Kingdom alone." - Is that the only damage toll? The infobox says $157 million USD (2011). Or is there a discrepancy because the USD totals are different years? Regardless of the reason, make them both 2011. Also, delink United Kingdom here if you follow through on the previous comment
"Guadeloupe for the potential of 3–5 meter (10–16 ft) swells.[13] Antigua and Barbuda recorded 0.85 inches (21.59 mm) of rainfall" - Why the switch in the order of the units?