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Hurricane Joanne was one of four tropical cyclones to bring gale-force winds to the
Southwestern United States? |
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Reviewer: Sven Manguard ( talk · contribs) 06:33, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
I will be performing a review of this nomination within the next 48 hours. Sven Manguard Wha? 06:33, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
GAN Quicksheet 1.24 SM
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Criteria)
Starting comments:
1. Well written:
2. Accurate and verifiable:
Section acceptable
3. Broad in coverage:
Section acceptable
4. Neutral:
Section acceptable
6. Image use:
Section acceptable
7. Additional items not required for a GA, but requested by the reviewer:
Comments after the initial review: To be blunt, you need to spend more time copyediting. I'm used to fixing articles up as I go during reviews, but you've left a lot more work for me to do in that regard than I can ever remember having to do for an article that I considered likely to pass. I'm sorry, but it just feels rushed, and the Wikicup isn't license to rush through prose. Sven Manguard Wha? 18:10, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
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![]() | A
fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the "
Did you know?" column on
May 5, 2013. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that
Hurricane Joanne was one of four tropical cyclones to bring gale-force winds to the
Southwestern United States? |
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: Sven Manguard ( talk · contribs) 06:33, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
I will be performing a review of this nomination within the next 48 hours. Sven Manguard Wha? 06:33, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
GAN Quicksheet 1.24 SM
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Criteria)
Starting comments:
1. Well written:
2. Accurate and verifiable:
Section acceptable
3. Broad in coverage:
Section acceptable
4. Neutral:
Section acceptable
6. Image use:
Section acceptable
7. Additional items not required for a GA, but requested by the reviewer:
Comments after the initial review: To be blunt, you need to spend more time copyediting. I'm used to fixing articles up as I go during reviews, but you've left a lot more work for me to do in that regard than I can ever remember having to do for an article that I considered likely to pass. I'm sorry, but it just feels rushed, and the Wikicup isn't license to rush through prose. Sven Manguard Wha? 18:10, 26 April 2013 (UTC)