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Reviewer: Yellow Evan ( talk · contribs) 19:09, 28 June 2013 (UTC) reply

"In Belize, where Iris made landfall, a hurricane warning was issued about 23 hours before the storm moved ashore.[3] " ditch the "where IRis made landfall" part since you mentioned it moved ashore later in the sentence. Y E Pacific Hurricane 19:09, 28 June 2013 (UTC) reply

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan ( talk · contribs) 19:09, 28 June 2013 (UTC) reply

"In Belize, where Iris made landfall, a hurricane warning was issued about 23 hours before the storm moved ashore.[3] " ditch the "where IRis made landfall" part since you mentioned it moved ashore later in the sentence. Y E Pacific Hurricane 19:09, 28 June 2013 (UTC) reply


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