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Reviewer: ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk) 16:48, 25 June 2011 (UTC)
I originally didn't want to review this, since I did the previous one, but seeing as it's been up here for a month, I'll review it.
I'm glad to see you addressed many of my comments from the previous GAN. Here are the ones you didn't tackle.
Here are some additional comments.
IMO, the article doesn't feel like it has enough info, for a storm that's only 21 years old and caused 139 deaths and $90 million in damage (and was retired). If I read the Mexican impact section up until the summary sentence, I would've assumed only 10 deaths or so, given the examples of damage in small areas, but lack of overall epic carnage. Overall, there should be more on what the hurricane did. In just a short search, a lot more useful info was found using Google news. I suggest you go through the Google news archive and get as much as you can, as the article is lacking too much right now for me to pass its GAN. However, the work might be doable in a week's time, so I'll put it on hold. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk) 16:55, 25 June 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: ♫ Hurricanehink ( talk) 16:48, 25 June 2011 (UTC)
I originally didn't want to review this, since I did the previous one, but seeing as it's been up here for a month, I'll review it.
I'm glad to see you addressed many of my comments from the previous GAN. Here are the ones you didn't tackle.
Here are some additional comments.
IMO, the article doesn't feel like it has enough info, for a storm that's only 21 years old and caused 139 deaths and $90 million in damage (and was retired). If I read the Mexican impact section up until the summary sentence, I would've assumed only 10 deaths or so, given the examples of damage in small areas, but lack of overall epic carnage. Overall, there should be more on what the hurricane did. In just a short search, a lot more useful info was found using Google news. I suggest you go through the Google news archive and get as much as you can, as the article is lacking too much right now for me to pass its GAN. However, the work might be doable in a week's time, so I'll put it on hold. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk) 16:55, 25 June 2011 (UTC)