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Reviewer: BlackJack ( talk · contribs) 12:04, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
I'll do this one. Will start soon. Jack | talk page 12:04, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for the six good article criteria:
The main part of the article is fine but I believe some work needs to be done on the introduction. With reference to WP:LEAD, it should really be "three to four paragraphs" (given that the article is 30k-plus) and I think it isn't quite a fully concise summary of the narrative. I'll leave it with you as you know the subject and I don't. Please let me know when you've had chance to consider. Placing "on hold" for now. Good work overall, though, and a very interesting article. He must have been quite a player. All the best. Jack | talk page 12:52, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
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Reviewer: BlackJack ( talk · contribs) 12:04, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
I'll do this one. Will start soon. Jack | talk page 12:04, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for the six good article criteria:
The main part of the article is fine but I believe some work needs to be done on the introduction. With reference to WP:LEAD, it should really be "three to four paragraphs" (given that the article is 30k-plus) and I think it isn't quite a fully concise summary of the narrative. I'll leave it with you as you know the subject and I don't. Please let me know when you've had chance to consider. Placing "on hold" for now. Good work overall, though, and a very interesting article. He must have been quite a player. All the best. Jack | talk page 12:52, 3 December 2016 (UTC)