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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 ( talk · contribs) 01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC) reply

Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap ( talk) 04:53, 13 May 2018 (UTC) reply

• Why is ref no. 3 a link to a google scholar search?    User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk  01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC) reply

Gone, guess ref 2 is sufficient context.

• The second, third, and fifth paragraphs in the Contents section needs a ref at the end

Added.

• I think the Publication, illustrations section could just be titled Publications    User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk  01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC) reply

Done.

• "As a result, 'The essay, thus, works...' " little redundant    User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk  01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC) reply

Gone.

• I did a little copyediting so I guess that's that    User:Dunkleosteus77 | push to talk  01:18, 13 May 2018 (UTC) reply

Thanks for doing that. Chiswick Chap ( talk) 05:12, 13 May 2018 (UTC) reply