I am reviewing this article as part of
GA Sweeps. This is a good resource that could use some work to raise it to current standards of
WP:WIAGA. I am about to outline a partial list of issues that need to be addressed. After I post this listing, I will give concerned and interested editors a week before I reevaluate the article's quality rating. I will be following along with the progress of the article and may make additional comments as it is appropriate.--
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WP:LOTM) 15:15, 8 October 2009 (UTC)reply
According to
the dablink tool the article has one circular redirect and one dab page that need to be resolved.
Is it possible that any of the information could be updated without too much trouble. Most of it is five years old.
The
WP:LEAD is extremely long. Please cut it from 4583 characters to less than 3200.
Please address the citation needed tags.
The article has several entire paragraphs that are without any citation. If the article is properly formatted with paragraphs covering distinct topics, each should have at least one citation.
The article begins with several one line paragraphs. Can these be merged or expanded.--
TonyTheTiger (
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WP:LOTM) 15:24, 8 October 2009 (UTC)reply
I am reviewing this article as part of
GA Sweeps. This is a good resource that could use some work to raise it to current standards of
WP:WIAGA. I am about to outline a partial list of issues that need to be addressed. After I post this listing, I will give concerned and interested editors a week before I reevaluate the article's quality rating. I will be following along with the progress of the article and may make additional comments as it is appropriate.--
TonyTheTiger (
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c/
bio/
WP:CHICAGO/
WP:LOTM) 15:15, 8 October 2009 (UTC)reply
According to
the dablink tool the article has one circular redirect and one dab page that need to be resolved.
Is it possible that any of the information could be updated without too much trouble. Most of it is five years old.
The
WP:LEAD is extremely long. Please cut it from 4583 characters to less than 3200.
Please address the citation needed tags.
The article has several entire paragraphs that are without any citation. If the article is properly formatted with paragraphs covering distinct topics, each should have at least one citation.
The article begins with several one line paragraphs. Can these be merged or expanded.--
TonyTheTiger (
t/
c/
bio/
WP:CHICAGO/
WP:LOTM) 15:24, 8 October 2009 (UTC)reply