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streaming next to Digital download with the appropriate target
"It was released as the fourth single from the album on 6 May 2016, through Lipa's
independent record label, Dua Lipa Limited." → "The song was released for
digital download and
streaming on 6 May 2016 through Dua Lipa Limited, as the albums fourth single." with the appropriate targets.
Remove "The song became a commercial success in Europe and Oceania"
Remove "The song peaked at number 17 in Australia"
"The song also charted in the top 40 of Belgium, the Netherlands, Poland and Slovenia." → "The song further reached the top 40 in Australia, Belgium, the Netherlands, Poland and Slovenia."
"where it debuted at number 50 on the chart dated 13 May 2016." → "where it debuted at number 50 on 13 May 2016."
Not done, I don't know why you wan't me to remove "the chart," but charts aren't updated everyday and this makes it more accurate. Plus some charts are published before their charting date, putting this would just make it more specific so we aren't just assuming a date.
LOVI3312:50, 26 July 2020 (UTC)reply
"On the chart dated 1 July 2016, the song peaked at number 15, where it stayed for three weeks" → "On 1 July 2016, the song rose to number 15 on the chart, where it stayed for three non-consecutive weeks."
Ditto here, also it's inaccurate, it's stayed for 3 consecutive weeks. Added the prose though, just not the inaccurate stuff.
"Hotter than Hell" reached number six and 24 respectively in Ireland and Scotland" → ""Hotter than Hell" has further peaked within the top 40 in Australia, Ireland and Scotland."
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
Infobox and lead
Add
streaming next to Digital download with the appropriate target
"It was released as the fourth single from the album on 6 May 2016, through Lipa's
independent record label, Dua Lipa Limited." → "The song was released for
digital download and
streaming on 6 May 2016 through Dua Lipa Limited, as the albums fourth single." with the appropriate targets.
Remove "The song became a commercial success in Europe and Oceania"
Remove "The song peaked at number 17 in Australia"
"The song also charted in the top 40 of Belgium, the Netherlands, Poland and Slovenia." → "The song further reached the top 40 in Australia, Belgium, the Netherlands, Poland and Slovenia."
"where it debuted at number 50 on the chart dated 13 May 2016." → "where it debuted at number 50 on 13 May 2016."
Not done, I don't know why you wan't me to remove "the chart," but charts aren't updated everyday and this makes it more accurate. Plus some charts are published before their charting date, putting this would just make it more specific so we aren't just assuming a date.
LOVI3312:50, 26 July 2020 (UTC)reply
"On the chart dated 1 July 2016, the song peaked at number 15, where it stayed for three weeks" → "On 1 July 2016, the song rose to number 15 on the chart, where it stayed for three non-consecutive weeks."
Ditto here, also it's inaccurate, it's stayed for 3 consecutive weeks. Added the prose though, just not the inaccurate stuff.
"Hotter than Hell" reached number six and 24 respectively in Ireland and Scotland" → ""Hotter than Hell" has further peaked within the top 40 in Australia, Ireland and Scotland."
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.