The image captions could be more specific, and you don't need to mention the name of the subject. For example, the taxobox image could say its a roosting group, instead of now just saying the name in singular, say and where it was taken.
Nose leaf, Honduras, carotenoid and holotype are overlinked.
nose-leaf: I left one link in taxonomy and one link in description Done
Honduras: Left one link in the lead & one in range & habitat Done
holotype: removed reference to the holotype in range & habitat per later suggestion. Done
carotenoid: There's only one hyperlink in description and one in human health. You think that's overlinked? I believe it's quite feasible someone would want to read only parts of the article, so I like the sections to be coherent to stand alone Not doneEnwebb (
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02:30, 18 May 2018 (UTC)reply
I read over the MOS and see now that duplicate hyperlinks are generally discouraged. I removed duplicate hyperlinks with the exception of Honduras, which has a link in the lead (per
MOS:DUPLINK) and one in range and habitat. DoneEnwebb (
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07:54, 20 May 2018 (UTC)reply
I'll be away until Monday, which should give you plenty of time to fix this, but if it is fixed within the coming hours, I should be able to pass already.
I'm back, and pleased to see the change, so will pass it now. I noticed the original description includes drawings
[1], perhaps a single image could be made of this an added? It would certainly be in the public domain due to age.
FunkMonk (
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13:02, 22 May 2018 (UTC)reply
The image captions could be more specific, and you don't need to mention the name of the subject. For example, the taxobox image could say its a roosting group, instead of now just saying the name in singular, say and where it was taken.
Nose leaf, Honduras, carotenoid and holotype are overlinked.
nose-leaf: I left one link in taxonomy and one link in description Done
Honduras: Left one link in the lead & one in range & habitat Done
holotype: removed reference to the holotype in range & habitat per later suggestion. Done
carotenoid: There's only one hyperlink in description and one in human health. You think that's overlinked? I believe it's quite feasible someone would want to read only parts of the article, so I like the sections to be coherent to stand alone Not doneEnwebb (
talk)
02:30, 18 May 2018 (UTC)reply
I read over the MOS and see now that duplicate hyperlinks are generally discouraged. I removed duplicate hyperlinks with the exception of Honduras, which has a link in the lead (per
MOS:DUPLINK) and one in range and habitat. DoneEnwebb (
talk)
07:54, 20 May 2018 (UTC)reply
I'll be away until Monday, which should give you plenty of time to fix this, but if it is fixed within the coming hours, I should be able to pass already.
I'm back, and pleased to see the change, so will pass it now. I noticed the original description includes drawings
[1], perhaps a single image could be made of this an added? It would certainly be in the public domain due to age.
FunkMonk (
talk)
13:02, 22 May 2018 (UTC)reply