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Reviewer: Adamstom.97 ( talk · contribs) 10:16, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
No worries about this being your first GAN, I'll be gentle! Let me take a little time to have a good read through the article and then I'll come back here with some thoughts. -
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10:16, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
There are definitely a few issues with this article that are currently preventing me from promoting it to GA, but with some work it can get there. Before I do a full sweep through the article to look for specific issues I want to talk about the start of the "Production" section. The opening paragraphs and "Casting" subsection don't really meet the requirements for broad coverage in my opinion. I would like to see some work put into investigating this further and expanding this into a combined "Development" subsection. Particular things that are missing for me are where the idea came from, how it was developed, what the creatives have said about, that sort of thing. I'll put the review on hold and give you some time to work on this before continuing. - adamstom97 ( talk) 23:37, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
Here is a more detailed break down of the article and issues that I have come across:
Buzz suddenly yells "Kevin, what did you do to my room?!", at which point Kevin runs off.I understand why this has been included, but generally we want to avoid "minutiae like dialogue, scene-by-scene breakdowns, individual jokes, and technical detail" per WP:FILMPLOT. My preference is that this line be removed.
Let me know if there are any concerns with these. - adamstom97 ( talk) 06:08, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
Thank you for the work done addressing my concerns so far Thatoneweirdwikier and Vaselineeeeeeee. The article is looking much better now. I would still like to see the final budget mentioned in the development section, and I like the idea of have a release section separate from the reception info with theatrical and home media content in the former. Once those are sorted I will have another read through of the article. - adamstom97 ( talk) 06:41, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
Good work responding to my points @
Thatoneweirdwikier and
Vaselineeeeeeee, I am now happy to pass this review. Congratulations! -
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01:35, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Adamstom.97 ( talk · contribs) 10:16, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
No worries about this being your first GAN, I'll be gentle! Let me take a little time to have a good read through the article and then I'll come back here with some thoughts. -
adamstom97 (
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10:16, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
There are definitely a few issues with this article that are currently preventing me from promoting it to GA, but with some work it can get there. Before I do a full sweep through the article to look for specific issues I want to talk about the start of the "Production" section. The opening paragraphs and "Casting" subsection don't really meet the requirements for broad coverage in my opinion. I would like to see some work put into investigating this further and expanding this into a combined "Development" subsection. Particular things that are missing for me are where the idea came from, how it was developed, what the creatives have said about, that sort of thing. I'll put the review on hold and give you some time to work on this before continuing. - adamstom97 ( talk) 23:37, 9 April 2020 (UTC)
Here is a more detailed break down of the article and issues that I have come across:
Buzz suddenly yells "Kevin, what did you do to my room?!", at which point Kevin runs off.I understand why this has been included, but generally we want to avoid "minutiae like dialogue, scene-by-scene breakdowns, individual jokes, and technical detail" per WP:FILMPLOT. My preference is that this line be removed.
Let me know if there are any concerns with these. - adamstom97 ( talk) 06:08, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
Thank you for the work done addressing my concerns so far Thatoneweirdwikier and Vaselineeeeeeee. The article is looking much better now. I would still like to see the final budget mentioned in the development section, and I like the idea of have a release section separate from the reception info with theatrical and home media content in the former. Once those are sorted I will have another read through of the article. - adamstom97 ( talk) 06:41, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
Good work responding to my points @
Thatoneweirdwikier and
Vaselineeeeeeee, I am now happy to pass this review. Congratulations! -
adamstom97 (
talk)
01:35, 14 April 2020 (UTC)