The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Natalia Kills picture shouldn't disrupt the following section.
Does not matter if its in right alignment, anyways I added the {{clear}} template.
revolutionoflove"." → #revolutionoflove".
funny." → same as previous
and co-produced three of the songs on the record, including "Holy Water". → and ended up by co-producing three songs on the record, including "Holy Water".
However, → A week later,
including the demo version of "Holy Water" → among those it was "Holy Water"
Yes, I meant "them". You already corrected, great work. Done
Composition and lyrical interpretation
martial beats → "martial beats"
her own song "Vogue" during the song's bridge → her own song "Vogue" during the track's bridge
rank sexuality." → rank sexuality".
and genuflect." → same as previous
"Yeezus loves my pussy best." → same as previous
own sexuality." → same as previous
spiritual imagery." → same as previous
Done
Critical reception
Link music critics
In the first paragraph I see a pattern is always "some author OF some magazine", use variations, like "Time Out's Nick Levine", "The Daily Telegraph reviewer Andy Gill", "Saeed Saeed, while reviewing Rebel Heart, for the newspaper The National" so on...
Once again, the issue with the quotes and the full stop. Please correct them all.
"a welcome bit of percolating electronica, and she deserves props for effortlessly deploying the word 'genuflect' in a pop song, but Madonna's Catholic baiting feels like a reflex at this point. Despite her well-documented reputation, you could count her sexually provocative songs on one hand up to this point, so the fact that she nearly doubles that number here in one fell swoop suggests she's either consciously taking the piss out of her Dita Parlo persona or making some kind of comment about women of a certain age unapologetically flexing their libidos" → you should reduce the length of this reviews and use your own words in between.
No reviews of the song as a track only?
Live performance
"Holy Water"...as part of the first segment. → source?
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Natalia Kills picture shouldn't disrupt the following section.
Does not matter if its in right alignment, anyways I added the {{clear}} template.
revolutionoflove"." → #revolutionoflove".
funny." → same as previous
and co-produced three of the songs on the record, including "Holy Water". → and ended up by co-producing three songs on the record, including "Holy Water".
However, → A week later,
including the demo version of "Holy Water" → among those it was "Holy Water"
Yes, I meant "them". You already corrected, great work. Done
Composition and lyrical interpretation
martial beats → "martial beats"
her own song "Vogue" during the song's bridge → her own song "Vogue" during the track's bridge
rank sexuality." → rank sexuality".
and genuflect." → same as previous
"Yeezus loves my pussy best." → same as previous
own sexuality." → same as previous
spiritual imagery." → same as previous
Done
Critical reception
Link music critics
In the first paragraph I see a pattern is always "some author OF some magazine", use variations, like "Time Out's Nick Levine", "The Daily Telegraph reviewer Andy Gill", "Saeed Saeed, while reviewing Rebel Heart, for the newspaper The National" so on...
Once again, the issue with the quotes and the full stop. Please correct them all.
"a welcome bit of percolating electronica, and she deserves props for effortlessly deploying the word 'genuflect' in a pop song, but Madonna's Catholic baiting feels like a reflex at this point. Despite her well-documented reputation, you could count her sexually provocative songs on one hand up to this point, so the fact that she nearly doubles that number here in one fell swoop suggests she's either consciously taking the piss out of her Dita Parlo persona or making some kind of comment about women of a certain age unapologetically flexing their libidos" → you should reduce the length of this reviews and use your own words in between.
No reviews of the song as a track only?
Live performance
"Holy Water"...as part of the first segment. → source?
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.