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Five months is far too long to be stuck in the GA Review backlog, especially for a topic as good as BCS. I'll start leaving comments in the next 1-3 days.--
Newtothisedit (
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04:11, 11 December 2022 (UTC)reply
Is it well written
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
"The house is revealed to be the operations center of people who are surveilling Gus Fring's house" change to "Their house is revealed to be the operations center of people who are surveilling Gus Fring's home.
She is the first Better Call Saul cast member to direct an episode of the series." change to "She became the first Better Call Saul cast member to direct an episode of the series." I would also add something about Esposito directing later on.
"she would work with Michelle MacLaren to break down episodes" add MacLaren's role on the show
"but by the time Better Call Saul had been ready to shoot there" change to "but by the time Better Call Saul was ready to shoot there"
"The only scene Seehorn had to watch the playback during filming" change to "The only scene Seehorn had to watch the playback of during filming"
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
Five months is far too long to be stuck in the GA Review backlog, especially for a topic as good as BCS. I'll start leaving comments in the next 1-3 days.--
Newtothisedit (
talk)
04:11, 11 December 2022 (UTC)reply
Is it well written
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
"The house is revealed to be the operations center of people who are surveilling Gus Fring's house" change to "Their house is revealed to be the operations center of people who are surveilling Gus Fring's home.
She is the first Better Call Saul cast member to direct an episode of the series." change to "She became the first Better Call Saul cast member to direct an episode of the series." I would also add something about Esposito directing later on.
"she would work with Michelle MacLaren to break down episodes" add MacLaren's role on the show
"but by the time Better Call Saul had been ready to shoot there" change to "but by the time Better Call Saul was ready to shoot there"
"The only scene Seehorn had to watch the playback during filming" change to "The only scene Seehorn had to watch the playback of during filming"
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.