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I will try to explain here why I put the tag on the article. There is use of the second person (you/you're), use of "'re" vs "are", editorial comments including "therefore", etc. This is mostly a tone issue: Wikipedia articles should instead just describe things. Once the article improved, the tag can be removed. Thanks, — Paleo Neonate – 18:20, 31 July 2018 (UTC)
Adding: there also appear to be synthesis ( WP:SYNTH): is there a source which mentions those various themes and sources? — Paleo Neonate – 18:22, 31 July 2018 (UTC)
Totally agree with the comments made on this page. History of the body sounds better and is more descriptive of my invisionment of the article. Many thanks for the comments.— Preceding
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I came to this page because I was looking for a Wikipedia entry for 'History of the body', which has been a major movement in historical research. @ Devon.evanovich: many thanks for your work on this page! I can see that this page could be developed in really useful ways from this foundation. I find 'History of the body and disorder' a bit of a hard title to understand though. The history of disorder seems like quite a huge and vague topic! I've created History of the body, and it currently redirects to History of the body and disorder, but I wonder if we could switch things around and make the main page into History of the body? Alarichall ( talk) 17:33, 3 August 2018 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: page moved. Vexations ( talk) 19:10, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
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History of beliefs about the human body be
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History of the body and disorder → History of the body – Quoting user Alarichall: "I find 'History of the body and disorder' a bit of a hard title to understand though. The history of disorder seems like quite a huge and vague topic! I've created History of the body, and it currently redirects to History of the body and disorder, but I wonder if we could switch things around and make the main page into History of the body?" — Paleo Neonate – 18:48, 3 August 2018 (UTC)
Same concepts but slightly different. I suggest the combination of the two. AmericanAir88 ( talk) 20:22, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: Moved. ( non-admin closure) The Duke of Nonsense What is necessary for thee? 09:36, 19 August 2018 (UTC)
History of the body → History of beliefs about the human body – The proposed title best reflects the scope and contents of the article. The current title is confusing (see the merge proposal above). The proposed title is more accurate, and also neatly fits in with our anatomy corpus, readily being linked from belief / social & cultural sections in several articles. Tom (LT) ( talk) 22:31, 12 August 2018 (UTC)
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I will try to explain here why I put the tag on the article. There is use of the second person (you/you're), use of "'re" vs "are", editorial comments including "therefore", etc. This is mostly a tone issue: Wikipedia articles should instead just describe things. Once the article improved, the tag can be removed. Thanks, — Paleo Neonate – 18:20, 31 July 2018 (UTC)
Adding: there also appear to be synthesis ( WP:SYNTH): is there a source which mentions those various themes and sources? — Paleo Neonate – 18:22, 31 July 2018 (UTC)
Totally agree with the comments made on this page. History of the body sounds better and is more descriptive of my invisionment of the article. Many thanks for the comments.— Preceding
unsigned comment added by
Devon.evanovich (
talk •
contribs)
22:15, 3 August 2018 (UTC)
I came to this page because I was looking for a Wikipedia entry for 'History of the body', which has been a major movement in historical research. @ Devon.evanovich: many thanks for your work on this page! I can see that this page could be developed in really useful ways from this foundation. I find 'History of the body and disorder' a bit of a hard title to understand though. The history of disorder seems like quite a huge and vague topic! I've created History of the body, and it currently redirects to History of the body and disorder, but I wonder if we could switch things around and make the main page into History of the body? Alarichall ( talk) 17:33, 3 August 2018 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: page moved. Vexations ( talk) 19:10, 6 August 2018 (UTC)
![]() | It was proposed in this section that
History of beliefs about the human body be
renamed and moved to
History of the body.
The discussion has been closed, and the result will be found in the closer's comment. Links:
current log •
target log |
History of the body and disorder → History of the body – Quoting user Alarichall: "I find 'History of the body and disorder' a bit of a hard title to understand though. The history of disorder seems like quite a huge and vague topic! I've created History of the body, and it currently redirects to History of the body and disorder, but I wonder if we could switch things around and make the main page into History of the body?" — Paleo Neonate – 18:48, 3 August 2018 (UTC)
Same concepts but slightly different. I suggest the combination of the two. AmericanAir88 ( talk) 20:22, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
The result of the move request was: Moved. ( non-admin closure) The Duke of Nonsense What is necessary for thee? 09:36, 19 August 2018 (UTC)
History of the body → History of beliefs about the human body – The proposed title best reflects the scope and contents of the article. The current title is confusing (see the merge proposal above). The proposed title is more accurate, and also neatly fits in with our anatomy corpus, readily being linked from belief / social & cultural sections in several articles. Tom (LT) ( talk) 22:31, 12 August 2018 (UTC)