"...he had been a fan of the show, but had never had the time to write an episode" and “Writer Neil Cross was a Doctor Who fan, but had never had the time to write an episode.”, Hmmm, suggest you tweak the tenses as it can imply he used to be Doctor Who fan, but isn’t now.
” Cross only had Coleman's five-minute audition for "Asylum of the Daleks" - in which she played a different but mysteriously linked character — to work from”, incorrect usage of dashes here.
Dan Martin’s review was not published in The Guardian, but
theguardian.com – its online edition.
I changed it to "The Guardian's online reviewer", let me know if it should be more rewritten. I' not sure how much that matters and all of these reviews (sans DWM) were probably just published online instead of in the actual print source. Glimmer721talk16:58, 6 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Newspaper sources should have the location parameter filled. In this case, The Independent and The Daily Telegraph are all London.
"...he had been a fan of the show, but had never had the time to write an episode" and “Writer Neil Cross was a Doctor Who fan, but had never had the time to write an episode.”, Hmmm, suggest you tweak the tenses as it can imply he used to be Doctor Who fan, but isn’t now.
” Cross only had Coleman's five-minute audition for "Asylum of the Daleks" - in which she played a different but mysteriously linked character — to work from”, incorrect usage of dashes here.
Dan Martin’s review was not published in The Guardian, but
theguardian.com – its online edition.
I changed it to "The Guardian's online reviewer", let me know if it should be more rewritten. I' not sure how much that matters and all of these reviews (sans DWM) were probably just published online instead of in the actual print source. Glimmer721talk16:58, 6 December 2013 (UTC)reply
Newspaper sources should have the location parameter filled. In this case, The Independent and The Daily Telegraph are all London.