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Not really, I read the article, and as I understand, it refers to the hills that occur by ploughing. But I followed some links and now I think that "
open fields" or "strip cultivation" would fit well. --
Tirkfltalk07:26, 21 August 2007 (UTC)reply
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Not really, I read the article, and as I understand, it refers to the hills that occur by ploughing. But I followed some links and now I think that "
open fields" or "strip cultivation" would fit well. --
Tirkfltalk07:26, 21 August 2007 (UTC)reply
The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic
javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.
Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at
Wikipedia:Lead. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on
WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.[?]
If there is not a
free use image in the top right corner of the article, please try to find and include one.[?]
Avoid including
galleries in articles, as per
Wikipedia:Galleries. Common solutions to this problem include moving the gallery to
wikicommons or integrating images with the text.[?]
When writing standard abbreviations, the abbreviations should not have a 's' to demark plurality (for example, change kms to km and lbs to lb).
Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally do not start with articles ('the', 'a(n)'). For example, if there was a section called ==The Biography==, it should be changed to ==Biography==.[?]
Per
Wikipedia:Manual of Style (headings), headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was
Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading ==Magellan's journey==, use ==Journey==.[?]
Per
WP:WIAFA, this article's table of contents (ToC) may be too long- consider shrinking it down by merging short sections or using a proper system of daughter pages as per
Wikipedia:Summary style.[?]
Watch for
redundancies that make the article too wordy instead of being crisp and concise. (You may wish to try Tony1's
redundancy exercises.)
Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
Avoid misplaced formality: “in order to/for” (-> to/for), “thereupon”, “notwithstanding”,
etc.