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since this is on a log scale, it might be called a plot of the reciprocal absolute temperature, which as we all know makes more sense anyway 2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:CD8E:A2F0:3F79:2CCF ( talk) 12:30, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
While looking at the "Historical background" section ( Hertzsprung–Russell diagram#Historical background) of the " Latest revision as of 02:00, 17 December 2023" version of this article, I noticed a word that may have some "room for improvement".
It was the word "equivalent" in the sentence
My suggestion is to change that one word -- ("equivalent") -- to [something more like] "proportional" or "analogous" ... or maybe even "indicative of".
Any comments? Mike Schwartz ( talk) 15:46, 4 January 2024 (UTC)
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since this is on a log scale, it might be called a plot of the reciprocal absolute temperature, which as we all know makes more sense anyway 2A01:CB0C:CD:D800:CD8E:A2F0:3F79:2CCF ( talk) 12:30, 25 June 2023 (UTC)
While looking at the "Historical background" section ( Hertzsprung–Russell diagram#Historical background) of the " Latest revision as of 02:00, 17 December 2023" version of this article, I noticed a word that may have some "room for improvement".
It was the word "equivalent" in the sentence
My suggestion is to change that one word -- ("equivalent") -- to [something more like] "proportional" or "analogous" ... or maybe even "indicative of".
Any comments? Mike Schwartz ( talk) 15:46, 4 January 2024 (UTC)