"At the industrial site" State what this is and its relation to the previous episode
"bounty hunter (Brian Thompson." Needs a parenthesis after 'Thompson'
"Mulder gets the drop on the Bounty Hunter" Make more encyclopedic
"Meanwhile, the First Elder meets with The Smoking Man" Note (
William B. Davis) after 'Man'
"The appearance of Samantha Mulder, this time as a clone of her from when she was still a little girl, was used in the episode due to series creator Chris Carter's desire to bring her back as an important element of the show, referring to her as being part of the lifeblood of the series." Run on sentence. Break up.
I've dealt with your concerns for criterion 1. Is there anything else that needs addressed (I see you've marked crit 6 as but not specified anything)?
GRAPPLEX22:24, 19 February 2012 (UTC)reply
"At the industrial site" State what this is and its relation to the previous episode
"bounty hunter (Brian Thompson." Needs a parenthesis after 'Thompson'
"Mulder gets the drop on the Bounty Hunter" Make more encyclopedic
"Meanwhile, the First Elder meets with The Smoking Man" Note (
William B. Davis) after 'Man'
"The appearance of Samantha Mulder, this time as a clone of her from when she was still a little girl, was used in the episode due to series creator Chris Carter's desire to bring her back as an important element of the show, referring to her as being part of the lifeblood of the series." Run on sentence. Break up.
I've dealt with your concerns for criterion 1. Is there anything else that needs addressed (I see you've marked crit 6 as but not specified anything)?
GRAPPLEX22:24, 19 February 2012 (UTC)reply