A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
All release dates should stay in "Release history" section Done
The prose should at least touch on the release time. Omitting this info would be like removing chart peaks since there is a table of them.
Adabow (
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05:39, 15 July 2011 (UTC)reply
"Usher sang "Love in This Club" with Young Jeezy at reality television show The Hills'third season finale on May 12..." - Change "at" to "on"; space between "Hills'" and "third"; specify year Done
"...and again, by himself, at the finale of the sixth season of Dancing with the Stars on May 20..." - Should be standalone sentence; specify year Done
"Usher performed a one-off showcase concert for 1,500 fans at indigO2, London on May 22, 2008. Tickets were allocated by ballot." - Combine sentences Done
Try and find another name for the section to fit it better Done
Yes, I had thought about that, but couldn't find a better one. I pondered "Impact", although the marriage break-up isn't really a result of the album. DO you have any suggestions?
Adabow (
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05:39, 15 July 2011 (UTC)reply
Include "Format" and "Label" columns; you can also add "Edition(s)" album if necessary Done
I don't believe it is possible to track down the various formats in every country and verify them with reliable sources. The label is noted in the "Release and promotion" prose section.
Adabow (
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05:39, 15 July 2011 (UTC)reply
Number one information should be in "Charts" section Done
Ew. No. Per
WP:FOOTER navigational boxes should be at the bottom of the article. I fix any articles that contain a separate section for them, and encourage you to do the same.
Adabow (
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05:39, 15 July 2011 (UTC)reply
After reviewing this article thoroughly, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are numerous issues that are affecting this article from reaching GA status. Here are the main issues:
Prose quality: The prose of this article needs some work. As you can see, there are numerous grammar and punctuation issues among others.
References to sources: There are a lot of spots where specific facts aren't supported by cited references.
Other issues have been listed above. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or debate the ones you believe do not affect good article status. -
Rp0211(talk2me)23:58, 14 July 2011 (UTC)reply
I went through all of the comments I left, and put the {{
done}} template around the items that have been fixed. I also put the {{
notdone}} template on issues that I believe still need to be addressed according to GA criteria. -
Rp0211(talk2me)07:13, 15 July 2011 (UTC)reply
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
All release dates should stay in "Release history" section Done
The prose should at least touch on the release time. Omitting this info would be like removing chart peaks since there is a table of them.
Adabow (
talk ·
contribs)
05:39, 15 July 2011 (UTC)reply
"Usher sang "Love in This Club" with Young Jeezy at reality television show The Hills'third season finale on May 12..." - Change "at" to "on"; space between "Hills'" and "third"; specify year Done
"...and again, by himself, at the finale of the sixth season of Dancing with the Stars on May 20..." - Should be standalone sentence; specify year Done
"Usher performed a one-off showcase concert for 1,500 fans at indigO2, London on May 22, 2008. Tickets were allocated by ballot." - Combine sentences Done
Try and find another name for the section to fit it better Done
Yes, I had thought about that, but couldn't find a better one. I pondered "Impact", although the marriage break-up isn't really a result of the album. DO you have any suggestions?
Adabow (
talk ·
contribs)
05:39, 15 July 2011 (UTC)reply
Include "Format" and "Label" columns; you can also add "Edition(s)" album if necessary Done
I don't believe it is possible to track down the various formats in every country and verify them with reliable sources. The label is noted in the "Release and promotion" prose section.
Adabow (
talk ·
contribs)
05:39, 15 July 2011 (UTC)reply
Number one information should be in "Charts" section Done
Ew. No. Per
WP:FOOTER navigational boxes should be at the bottom of the article. I fix any articles that contain a separate section for them, and encourage you to do the same.
Adabow (
talk ·
contribs)
05:39, 15 July 2011 (UTC)reply
After reviewing this article thoroughly, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are numerous issues that are affecting this article from reaching GA status. Here are the main issues:
Prose quality: The prose of this article needs some work. As you can see, there are numerous grammar and punctuation issues among others.
References to sources: There are a lot of spots where specific facts aren't supported by cited references.
Other issues have been listed above. I will give you the general seven days to fix these mistakes and/or debate the ones you believe do not affect good article status. -
Rp0211(talk2me)23:58, 14 July 2011 (UTC)reply
I went through all of the comments I left, and put the {{
done}} template around the items that have been fixed. I also put the {{
notdone}} template on issues that I believe still need to be addressed according to GA criteria. -
Rp0211(talk2me)07:13, 15 July 2011 (UTC)reply