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This article is going to be our model to follow: In Utero. It is a featured article, and I plan to use it as a model the same way I'm trying to follow Nirvana for this band's main page. LazyBastard Guy 11:29, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
I will be the first to admit that I am utterly and thoroughly confused about the band's singles chronology. However, as I find more sources I will keep adding them, and although I'm not sure this was the first time "I Am the Night" came out as a single, I will add the music-news source that says it was released in April 2007. Until we have something better we'll have to go with it. LazyBastard Guy 12:58, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
The article seems almost done to me. Really, the only thing left is the "Background and recording" section, which I want to at least double in size (as of this writing). Then I can expand the lead paragraph to include that information as well. As for chart and sales information, there's ironically not much available for Hello Master either (for Prior to the Fire that information just does not seem to exist at all), so I'm not sure how much I can do with that (and I might merge it back into "Release and reception" if it makes more sense). Lazy Bastard Guy 19:53, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
I changed the name of the "Background and recording" section to just "Background" because absolutely nothing has been said about the recording sessions in and of themselves; I know it was recorded at the Boiler Room in NYC with additional help from Werner F. - perhaps I could just source that from the album booklet, I'll see about that - and what I would like to include is the fact that Gus was the Stills' manager at the time, but that leaves the question of how he met up with Priestess and got set to help them record their album. I suppose I'll see what I can do, but in the meantime, this article is practically done unless I find more to add. If/when I can get these minor problems resolved I'll go for a GA review and see where things stand. Cheerio, Lazy Bastard Guy 20:15, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
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I know there's other concerns, but since some of these will take awhile anyway I'll come back in a little bit. Thanks again for taking the review. Lazy Bastard Guy 18:30, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
Actually, you know what? I’m withdrawing this nomination. The fact is that while I feel confident this is the best article that we can have on this subject for now, Wikipedia will still be here tomorrow and whenever new information and sources on this subject arrive. I have concerns that some of the sources I have used are not suitable, in particular the dead link, and I would really like to fill out the “Background and recording” section way more. Good articles take time to come together and I’ve done all I can here for now from a content standpoint, but it's not enough just yet. This would have been my second good article (of a hopeful 100), and while I do value your feedback and would appreciate whatever other comments you have on it (I will still rewrite the citations, for example), the fact of the matter is that this is simply not eligible for review at this time. Given the nature of the subject and what I know about it, it may never be. I don’t know.
If you could still post whatever feedback you were hoping to post, that would just be awesome, but in the meantime, please close this review as failed.
In the meantime, I’ll just find another few albums to obsess over and write articles for. It would be refreshing to find something totally new to work on, a brand new article to write that hasn't even been started yet. ;) Lazy Bastard Guy 23:00, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
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This article is going to be our model to follow: In Utero. It is a featured article, and I plan to use it as a model the same way I'm trying to follow Nirvana for this band's main page. LazyBastard Guy 11:29, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
I will be the first to admit that I am utterly and thoroughly confused about the band's singles chronology. However, as I find more sources I will keep adding them, and although I'm not sure this was the first time "I Am the Night" came out as a single, I will add the music-news source that says it was released in April 2007. Until we have something better we'll have to go with it. LazyBastard Guy 12:58, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
The article seems almost done to me. Really, the only thing left is the "Background and recording" section, which I want to at least double in size (as of this writing). Then I can expand the lead paragraph to include that information as well. As for chart and sales information, there's ironically not much available for Hello Master either (for Prior to the Fire that information just does not seem to exist at all), so I'm not sure how much I can do with that (and I might merge it back into "Release and reception" if it makes more sense). Lazy Bastard Guy 19:53, 21 July 2013 (UTC)
I changed the name of the "Background and recording" section to just "Background" because absolutely nothing has been said about the recording sessions in and of themselves; I know it was recorded at the Boiler Room in NYC with additional help from Werner F. - perhaps I could just source that from the album booklet, I'll see about that - and what I would like to include is the fact that Gus was the Stills' manager at the time, but that leaves the question of how he met up with Priestess and got set to help them record their album. I suppose I'll see what I can do, but in the meantime, this article is practically done unless I find more to add. If/when I can get these minor problems resolved I'll go for a GA review and see where things stand. Cheerio, Lazy Bastard Guy 20:15, 8 December 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Вик Ретлхед ( talk · contribs) 16:24, 27 February 2014 (UTC)
I know there's other concerns, but since some of these will take awhile anyway I'll come back in a little bit. Thanks again for taking the review. Lazy Bastard Guy 18:30, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
Actually, you know what? I’m withdrawing this nomination. The fact is that while I feel confident this is the best article that we can have on this subject for now, Wikipedia will still be here tomorrow and whenever new information and sources on this subject arrive. I have concerns that some of the sources I have used are not suitable, in particular the dead link, and I would really like to fill out the “Background and recording” section way more. Good articles take time to come together and I’ve done all I can here for now from a content standpoint, but it's not enough just yet. This would have been my second good article (of a hopeful 100), and while I do value your feedback and would appreciate whatever other comments you have on it (I will still rewrite the citations, for example), the fact of the matter is that this is simply not eligible for review at this time. Given the nature of the subject and what I know about it, it may never be. I don’t know.
If you could still post whatever feedback you were hoping to post, that would just be awesome, but in the meantime, please close this review as failed.
In the meantime, I’ll just find another few albums to obsess over and write articles for. It would be refreshing to find something totally new to work on, a brand new article to write that hasn't even been started yet. ;) Lazy Bastard Guy 23:00, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
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