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Just the few prose issues above keep this from passing. I'm placing on hold for seven days, but I'm sure you'll be able to address them easily enough. — Bellhalla ( talk) 15:28, 13 May 2009 (UTC)
Hey, "Dreadnought" was a British class of warships. How can a German vessel be member of the Dreadnought class while sailing under the German flag? 93.104.40.40 ( talk) 18:03, 25 October 2009 (UTC)
Similar articles ( St Vincent-class battleship, HMS Neptune (1909), Colossus-class battleship (1910), Nassau-class battleship, etc...) do not have "An illustration of ..." in the images. In fact, I don't remember seeing any article where images are captioned "An illustration of ..." (besides this one). It is my opinion that it's unecessary (readers aren't that dumb, come on) and just verbose. 69.165.196.103 ( talk) 21:12, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
Both images I see ( http://www.bild.bundesarchiv.de/archives/barchpic/search/1497365456/1497365995/_1497366002/ , nos. 2 and 3) look similar enough - if you wish, do put the "original" one in the article, but it still is a picture, which is something that doesn't require being pointed out to the reader (we agree it's not an illustration/drawing). I will change the caption of the other one so that it fits what is shown, like at Nassau-class_battleship#Battle_of_Jutland (it's a drawing by the RN). 69.165.196.103 ( talk) 21:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)
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GA review of
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Comments (which don't affect GA nomination):
Just the few prose issues above keep this from passing. I'm placing on hold for seven days, but I'm sure you'll be able to address them easily enough. — Bellhalla ( talk) 15:28, 13 May 2009 (UTC)
Hey, "Dreadnought" was a British class of warships. How can a German vessel be member of the Dreadnought class while sailing under the German flag? 93.104.40.40 ( talk) 18:03, 25 October 2009 (UTC)
Similar articles ( St Vincent-class battleship, HMS Neptune (1909), Colossus-class battleship (1910), Nassau-class battleship, etc...) do not have "An illustration of ..." in the images. In fact, I don't remember seeing any article where images are captioned "An illustration of ..." (besides this one). It is my opinion that it's unecessary (readers aren't that dumb, come on) and just verbose. 69.165.196.103 ( talk) 21:12, 12 June 2017 (UTC)
Both images I see ( http://www.bild.bundesarchiv.de/archives/barchpic/search/1497365456/1497365995/_1497366002/ , nos. 2 and 3) look similar enough - if you wish, do put the "original" one in the article, but it still is a picture, which is something that doesn't require being pointed out to the reader (we agree it's not an illustration/drawing). I will change the caption of the other one so that it fits what is shown, like at Nassau-class_battleship#Battle_of_Jutland (it's a drawing by the RN). 69.165.196.103 ( talk) 21:16, 13 June 2017 (UTC)