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Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 22:53, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
I will do this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed ( talk) 22:53, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
We have the guts of a good, albeit small, article here. My initial thoughts are that the structure is the area that requires the most improvement so I am going to do some suggestions around this aspect primarily along with a few other comments on things that have caught my eye. Detailed comments may follow once the structure has been sorted.
Hope that is enough for you to make a start. Cheers, Zawed ( talk) 23:20, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
Zawed, Kges1901, where does this review currently stand? The last comment and response was made nearly four weeks ago, the same day as the most recent edit to the article referred to in that response. Thanks. BlueMoonset ( talk) 17:13, 27 September 2019 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Zawed ( talk · contribs) 22:53, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
I will do this one, comments to follow in due course. Zawed ( talk) 22:53, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
We have the guts of a good, albeit small, article here. My initial thoughts are that the structure is the area that requires the most improvement so I am going to do some suggestions around this aspect primarily along with a few other comments on things that have caught my eye. Detailed comments may follow once the structure has been sorted.
Hope that is enough for you to make a start. Cheers, Zawed ( talk) 23:20, 20 July 2019 (UTC)
Zawed, Kges1901, where does this review currently stand? The last comment and response was made nearly four weeks ago, the same day as the most recent edit to the article referred to in that response. Thanks. BlueMoonset ( talk) 17:13, 27 September 2019 (UTC)