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The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. -- Edofedinburgh 00:43, 24 March 2007 (UTC)
Can someone improve the dreadful English, please? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.68.94.86 ( talk) 23:54, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
Removed the sentence:
The non-static universe has been recognized since the 1930s from redshift evidence, not darkness of the sky. Chris C 11:45, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as start, and the rating on other projects was brought up to start class. BetacommandBot 09:54, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
Also need to include Olber's_paradox 101.175.183.220 ( talk) 05:04, 29 March 2015 (UTC)
I can see that early versions are written in US English, but it does not seem appropriate to me to leave it that way. What do others think? Dondervogel 2 ( talk) 20:25, 2 December 2015 (UTC)
Changed the first sentence under the heading "Life and career" from "Olbers was born in Arbergen, today part of Bremen" to "Olbers was born in Arbergen, Germany, today part of Bremen". This makes it clear to the reader not familiar with cities in Germany where Olbers was born. Although it has been declared at the beginning of the article he was a "German physician and astronomer", it doesn't establish he was actually born in Germany.☉Qψîδịzഴⓧ•—> Quisizyx talk 10:21, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
http://nla.gov.au/nla.news-article1090251 One paragraph in this article, might be of interest to someone. jayoval ( talk) 07:04, 28 April 2024 (UTC)
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The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. -- Edofedinburgh 00:43, 24 March 2007 (UTC)
Can someone improve the dreadful English, please? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 82.68.94.86 ( talk) 23:54, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
Removed the sentence:
The non-static universe has been recognized since the 1930s from redshift evidence, not darkness of the sky. Chris C 11:45, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
This article was automatically assessed because at least one WikiProject had rated the article as start, and the rating on other projects was brought up to start class. BetacommandBot 09:54, 10 November 2007 (UTC)
Also need to include Olber's_paradox 101.175.183.220 ( talk) 05:04, 29 March 2015 (UTC)
I can see that early versions are written in US English, but it does not seem appropriate to me to leave it that way. What do others think? Dondervogel 2 ( talk) 20:25, 2 December 2015 (UTC)
Changed the first sentence under the heading "Life and career" from "Olbers was born in Arbergen, today part of Bremen" to "Olbers was born in Arbergen, Germany, today part of Bremen". This makes it clear to the reader not familiar with cities in Germany where Olbers was born. Although it has been declared at the beginning of the article he was a "German physician and astronomer", it doesn't establish he was actually born in Germany.☉Qψîδịzഴⓧ•—> Quisizyx talk 10:21, 9 March 2021 (UTC)
http://nla.gov.au/nla.news-article1090251 One paragraph in this article, might be of interest to someone. jayoval ( talk) 07:04, 28 April 2024 (UTC)