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Graham was shot by pistols, (just) possibly in a gun fight. His daughter wasn't there, nor was West. Anmccaff ( talk) 16:18, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
PDGPA ( talk) 20:01, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
The article has stated, for a while, "She moved to Los Angeles in the early 1960s, where she continued singing and later married." Married whom? For how long? How did the marriage end? Honestly, this unsupported assertion seems inconsistent with the statements in the following paragraph about Hedy's 1962 engagement and 1968 marriage in London. I note the recent improvements drawn from an article in the Oxford [British] Dictionary of National Biography (curiously cited with the dates "(1938-2016)", although Hedy died in 2005). Perhaps that editor (the esteemed User:Victuallers) could also resolve this point. PDGPA ( talk) 23:18, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
The entry says 'She was described by the English folk musician A. L. Lloyd as "far and away the best of American girl singers in the [folk] revival."' The grammar is wrong, and so this makes no sense. A. L. Lloyd was either saying she was ONE of the best American girl singers, or was he saying she was "the best American girl singer." One or the other. Which is it? Jeri Southern ( talk) 18:58, 18 December 2023 (UTC)
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Graham was shot by pistols, (just) possibly in a gun fight. His daughter wasn't there, nor was West. Anmccaff ( talk) 16:18, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
PDGPA ( talk) 20:01, 13 July 2017 (UTC)
The article has stated, for a while, "She moved to Los Angeles in the early 1960s, where she continued singing and later married." Married whom? For how long? How did the marriage end? Honestly, this unsupported assertion seems inconsistent with the statements in the following paragraph about Hedy's 1962 engagement and 1968 marriage in London. I note the recent improvements drawn from an article in the Oxford [British] Dictionary of National Biography (curiously cited with the dates "(1938-2016)", although Hedy died in 2005). Perhaps that editor (the esteemed User:Victuallers) could also resolve this point. PDGPA ( talk) 23:18, 14 November 2020 (UTC)
The entry says 'She was described by the English folk musician A. L. Lloyd as "far and away the best of American girl singers in the [folk] revival."' The grammar is wrong, and so this makes no sense. A. L. Lloyd was either saying she was ONE of the best American girl singers, or was he saying she was "the best American girl singer." One or the other. Which is it? Jeri Southern ( talk) 18:58, 18 December 2023 (UTC)