"Lost and Alias helped ABC win the night"; maybe change to: "With this, Lost and Alias helped ABC win the night" or some other transition.
I like your wording and have used it.
"... main characters crossing paths (Sawyer is ..."; is this an error, or the start of a parenthetical statement?
'... Ryan McGee characterized the episode as having a "weak backstory with a creeptastic ending," and enjoyed Locke for being ...'; perhaps change to: '... Ryan McGee characterized the episode as having a "weak backstory with a creeptastic ending," although he enjoyed Locke for being ...' (better contrast).
Thank you for reviewing! I've addressed all but the "crossing paths" comment. I don't see any issues with that sentence (the parenthetical just includes an example of characters' crossing paths); could you clarify your opinion? Thanks! Ruby2010/201303:22, 12 August 2014 (UTC)reply
"Lost and Alias helped ABC win the night"; maybe change to: "With this, Lost and Alias helped ABC win the night" or some other transition.
I like your wording and have used it.
"... main characters crossing paths (Sawyer is ..."; is this an error, or the start of a parenthetical statement?
'... Ryan McGee characterized the episode as having a "weak backstory with a creeptastic ending," and enjoyed Locke for being ...'; perhaps change to: '... Ryan McGee characterized the episode as having a "weak backstory with a creeptastic ending," although he enjoyed Locke for being ...' (better contrast).
Thank you for reviewing! I've addressed all but the "crossing paths" comment. I don't see any issues with that sentence (the parenthetical just includes an example of characters' crossing paths); could you clarify your opinion? Thanks! Ruby2010/201303:22, 12 August 2014 (UTC)reply