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Reviewer: Vaticidalprophet ( talk · contribs) 05:43, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
Picking this up. This is a longer article, and a full review may take some time. My quick impression is positive. (🎵 In the night I hear them talk, the coldest story ever told... 🎵) Vaticidal prophet 05:43, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
First comments in the first couple of sections:
The song is the only one on the album that contains rapping from West, while rap features are contributed to "Amazing" and "See You in My Nightmares" by Lil Wayne and Young Jeezy, respectivelywould sound better switched from passive to active voice; I'm not one of the passive-voice-purgers, but it's a bit unexpected here, if that makes sense.
For seeking out a minimalist direction sonically, West directed his team to bring unique drum machines to Avex Recording Studio-- "for"? (And what was unique about the drum machines?)
Vaticidal prophet 12:25, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
New reviewer needed per discussion here. -- Usernameunique ( talk) 21:22, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
As noted above, the reviewer will not be returning—discussion has been archived and is now here—and two-and-a-half-month attempt to get a new reviewer by changing the status to 2nd opinion has not gotten any results. Accordingly, I have returned the nomination to the pool of those awaiting a reviewer without any loss of seniority. I hope it will be picked up reasonably quickly. The next review will take place on a different page from this one. Pinging nominator K. Peake, so they know what is happening. BlueMoonset ( talk) 05:34, 3 October 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Vaticidalprophet ( talk · contribs) 05:43, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
Picking this up. This is a longer article, and a full review may take some time. My quick impression is positive. (🎵 In the night I hear them talk, the coldest story ever told... 🎵) Vaticidal prophet 05:43, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
First comments in the first couple of sections:
The song is the only one on the album that contains rapping from West, while rap features are contributed to "Amazing" and "See You in My Nightmares" by Lil Wayne and Young Jeezy, respectivelywould sound better switched from passive to active voice; I'm not one of the passive-voice-purgers, but it's a bit unexpected here, if that makes sense.
For seeking out a minimalist direction sonically, West directed his team to bring unique drum machines to Avex Recording Studio-- "for"? (And what was unique about the drum machines?)
Vaticidal prophet 12:25, 9 July 2021 (UTC)
New reviewer needed per discussion here. -- Usernameunique ( talk) 21:22, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
As noted above, the reviewer will not be returning—discussion has been archived and is now here—and two-and-a-half-month attempt to get a new reviewer by changing the status to 2nd opinion has not gotten any results. Accordingly, I have returned the nomination to the pool of those awaiting a reviewer without any loss of seniority. I hope it will be picked up reasonably quickly. The next review will take place on a different page from this one. Pinging nominator K. Peake, so they know what is happening. BlueMoonset ( talk) 05:34, 3 October 2021 (UTC)