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"a competition to determine" → "a competition for determining"
"As part from the competition's rules" → "For following the competition's rules"
"The singer took part" → "Ndoci took part"
"song "Balada e Gurit" composed by Adrian Hila and written by
Pandi Laço" → "song "Balada e Gurit", composed by Hila and written by Laço"
"Musically, it is an" → "Musically, the latter is an" to avoid confusion
Done
Music video
The info in Release history should also be written out in the body, so re-title this section to Release and promotion, since the music video is promotion obviously. Start the sentence by mentioning the two releases of the song, including what label(s) they were on, then write about the video.
Sure you couldn't include more info about the music video than is currently here? Doesn't seem broad enough right now at all.
"premiered onto the official" → "premiered on the official"
Done
At Eurovision
Festivali i Këngës
Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës in the text as that's already been done in the body of this article
Ditto for Eurovision Song Contest 2007
"21 and 22 December, and the grand final on 23 December 2006" → "21 and 22 December 2006, and the grand final on 23 December of that year"
"in which,
Frederik Ndoci was chosen" → "which included Ndoci being chosen"
Done
Helsinki
Remove wikilinks on 52nd edition and Helsinki here
"10 May, and the grand final on 12 May 2007" → "10 May 2007, followed by the grand final on 12 May of that year"
@
Iaof2017: Appears not for the music video information, are you sure you can't find info about the synopsis? Also, you haven't made the fix to release history that I suggested. Plus retitle that other section to Release and promotion, since release should be wrote about first; change standalone download to
digital download and mention both labels that it was through, with those labels being mentioned under the release in the lead as well. --
Kyle Peake (
talk) 15:28, 6 May 2020 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: Thanks, I previously forgot to follow few comments but i fixed them now. Regarding the music video, I can try to add a sentence about the synopsis but I couldn't find any sources.--
Lorik17 (
talk) 15:39, 6 May 2020 (UTC)reply
Iaof2017, it is fine I understand that the article is broad enough even without you writing about the video, due to the contests' coverage mostly, and I see that the lack of synopsis is
WP:GOOD FAITH. ✓Pass! --
Kyle Peake (
talk) 16:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)reply
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"a competition to determine" → "a competition for determining"
"As part from the competition's rules" → "For following the competition's rules"
"The singer took part" → "Ndoci took part"
"song "Balada e Gurit" composed by Adrian Hila and written by
Pandi Laço" → "song "Balada e Gurit", composed by Hila and written by Laço"
"Musically, it is an" → "Musically, the latter is an" to avoid confusion
Done
Music video
The info in Release history should also be written out in the body, so re-title this section to Release and promotion, since the music video is promotion obviously. Start the sentence by mentioning the two releases of the song, including what label(s) they were on, then write about the video.
Sure you couldn't include more info about the music video than is currently here? Doesn't seem broad enough right now at all.
"premiered onto the official" → "premiered on the official"
Done
At Eurovision
Festivali i Këngës
Remove wikilink on Festivali i Këngës in the text as that's already been done in the body of this article
Ditto for Eurovision Song Contest 2007
"21 and 22 December, and the grand final on 23 December 2006" → "21 and 22 December 2006, and the grand final on 23 December of that year"
"in which,
Frederik Ndoci was chosen" → "which included Ndoci being chosen"
Done
Helsinki
Remove wikilinks on 52nd edition and Helsinki here
"10 May, and the grand final on 12 May 2007" → "10 May 2007, followed by the grand final on 12 May of that year"
@
Iaof2017: Appears not for the music video information, are you sure you can't find info about the synopsis? Also, you haven't made the fix to release history that I suggested. Plus retitle that other section to Release and promotion, since release should be wrote about first; change standalone download to
digital download and mention both labels that it was through, with those labels being mentioned under the release in the lead as well. --
Kyle Peake (
talk) 15:28, 6 May 2020 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: Thanks, I previously forgot to follow few comments but i fixed them now. Regarding the music video, I can try to add a sentence about the synopsis but I couldn't find any sources.--
Lorik17 (
talk) 15:39, 6 May 2020 (UTC)reply
Iaof2017, it is fine I understand that the article is broad enough even without you writing about the video, due to the contests' coverage mostly, and I see that the lack of synopsis is
WP:GOOD FAITH. ✓Pass! --
Kyle Peake (
talk) 16:29, 6 May 2020 (UTC)reply