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Reviewer: Kusma ( talk · contribs) 15:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Will take this one, expect comments within a few days. — Kusma ( talk) 15:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
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OK, first impressions. This looks like a well-researched article, and the sources look like high quality scholarly material. I don't see hint of OR, copyvio or neutrality concerns. Article is stable. I'm not happy with the images situation: the map should be zoomed in far more so the red triangle doesn't cover half of North Island. Something like File:Kermadec Arc.jpg would probably help understand the situation. Have you considered File:Expl1831 - Flickr - NOAA Photo Library.jpg (from [1])? MOS: The Smithsonian and Te Ara external links should be in an "External links" section (or reused as references). Will comment on prose/broadness/focus below while doing section by section review. — Kusma ( talk) 20:25, 21 April 2022 (UTC)
The images in the infobox need better captions. — Kusma ( talk) 16:08, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
590±80 years agoas that becomes wrong at a rate of 1 year per year.
Parts of the "Loisels Pumice" in New Zealand is suspectedare suspected, or change "parts" to "a part" or similar
There, the Pacificthis "there" refers to Colville Ridge only?
at the latitude of Healy.[3] giving riseGood to split the sentence, but perhaps start the second one "This gives rise"?
better studied than the rest of the arcnot sure this is relevant here
Healy is part of a northwest-trending chain of volcanoes, which includes Giljanes, Yokosuka and RapuhiaThis would be so much easier to understand with a decent map like in Wysoczanski et al... but probably not easy to get one.
most of the flanks are covered with ... rare outcropsI'm probably misunderstanding something, but are there only very few outcrops (in which case "outcrops are rare" would perhaps be easier to read) or is "rare outcrops" something specific like "outcrops consisting of rare earths"?
Healy volcano may feature ore deposits and has been considered a target for mineral prospecting.I don't see anything about ore deposits in the source (and it might be nice to say who has considered this). "
Although active SMS (seafloor massive sulfide)-forming processes are observed in widespread sulphide chimneys there is no accumulation at or near the surface of commercial quantity of sulphide mineralization in the areas drilled”, based on 23 core holes up to 14 m deep drilled in 2005. Their report identifies the calderas of Brothers and adjacent Healy submarine volcanoes as “drilling targets”Jo-Jo Eumerus ( talk) 19:24, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
Healy is dominantly formed by rhyodacitic rocks but basalt also occurs, they define a low-potassium suite.I'm too non-geologist to understand what a "low-potassium suite" is, so I only have a grammar question: what does "they" refer to?
although an origin through fractional crystallization is possible at Healyas the previous sentence said that, I don't understand why you contrast it with "although".
A hydrophone data indicateDo you mean "Data from a hydrophone indicate"?
they might have been transported on land by tsunamison land or onto land?
Enough for today; I'll look again this weekend (more copyediting may be needed, but I'm too tired for that now). Hope you find my name and discovery-related finds in the section above useful. — Kusma ( talk) 22:03, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
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As noted above official name has now changed twice and since 2017 is James Healy Seamount see https://gazetteer.linz.govt.nz/place/56549 ChaseKiwi ( talk) 22:10, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
Wondering weather it is worth adding a sub section for the Cotton Seamount witch is a part of the southern flank of Healy Seamount
as at the moment the cotton seamount links directly to this article without much explanation altho it is listed in local i think this could be more clear Rocketmannz ( talk) 05:34, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Kusma ( talk · contribs) 15:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
Will take this one, expect comments within a few days. — Kusma ( talk) 15:48, 20 April 2022 (UTC)
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OK, first impressions. This looks like a well-researched article, and the sources look like high quality scholarly material. I don't see hint of OR, copyvio or neutrality concerns. Article is stable. I'm not happy with the images situation: the map should be zoomed in far more so the red triangle doesn't cover half of North Island. Something like File:Kermadec Arc.jpg would probably help understand the situation. Have you considered File:Expl1831 - Flickr - NOAA Photo Library.jpg (from [1])? MOS: The Smithsonian and Te Ara external links should be in an "External links" section (or reused as references). Will comment on prose/broadness/focus below while doing section by section review. — Kusma ( talk) 20:25, 21 April 2022 (UTC)
The images in the infobox need better captions. — Kusma ( talk) 16:08, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
590±80 years agoas that becomes wrong at a rate of 1 year per year.
Parts of the "Loisels Pumice" in New Zealand is suspectedare suspected, or change "parts" to "a part" or similar
There, the Pacificthis "there" refers to Colville Ridge only?
at the latitude of Healy.[3] giving riseGood to split the sentence, but perhaps start the second one "This gives rise"?
better studied than the rest of the arcnot sure this is relevant here
Healy is part of a northwest-trending chain of volcanoes, which includes Giljanes, Yokosuka and RapuhiaThis would be so much easier to understand with a decent map like in Wysoczanski et al... but probably not easy to get one.
most of the flanks are covered with ... rare outcropsI'm probably misunderstanding something, but are there only very few outcrops (in which case "outcrops are rare" would perhaps be easier to read) or is "rare outcrops" something specific like "outcrops consisting of rare earths"?
Healy volcano may feature ore deposits and has been considered a target for mineral prospecting.I don't see anything about ore deposits in the source (and it might be nice to say who has considered this). "
Although active SMS (seafloor massive sulfide)-forming processes are observed in widespread sulphide chimneys there is no accumulation at or near the surface of commercial quantity of sulphide mineralization in the areas drilled”, based on 23 core holes up to 14 m deep drilled in 2005. Their report identifies the calderas of Brothers and adjacent Healy submarine volcanoes as “drilling targets”Jo-Jo Eumerus ( talk) 19:24, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
Healy is dominantly formed by rhyodacitic rocks but basalt also occurs, they define a low-potassium suite.I'm too non-geologist to understand what a "low-potassium suite" is, so I only have a grammar question: what does "they" refer to?
although an origin through fractional crystallization is possible at Healyas the previous sentence said that, I don't understand why you contrast it with "although".
A hydrophone data indicateDo you mean "Data from a hydrophone indicate"?
they might have been transported on land by tsunamison land or onto land?
Enough for today; I'll look again this weekend (more copyediting may be needed, but I'm too tired for that now). Hope you find my name and discovery-related finds in the section above useful. — Kusma ( talk) 22:03, 22 April 2022 (UTC)
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As noted above official name has now changed twice and since 2017 is James Healy Seamount see https://gazetteer.linz.govt.nz/place/56549 ChaseKiwi ( talk) 22:10, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
Wondering weather it is worth adding a sub section for the Cotton Seamount witch is a part of the southern flank of Healy Seamount
as at the moment the cotton seamount links directly to this article without much explanation altho it is listed in local i think this could be more clear Rocketmannz ( talk) 05:34, 7 April 2024 (UTC)