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I noticed on your article you cite the same website multiple times. You can give a reference a name by adding <ref name="Reference 1"> before the first citation. Later in your article if you want to cite the same source you can just put <ref name= "Reference 1"/>
This way the citation is giving a single reference number and your References at the end of your article will be more condensed.
Cheers, TotranM
Also, I don't know if it's possible but consider removing the acronym from the title. I looked at some other environmental statutes and they don't have the acronym as part of the article page name. It might be harder to link from other pages. Totranm ( talk) 18:00, 24 April 2013 (UTC)
I think that the enforcement section of the article can be reorganized. You have three sections that cover similar topics but fall under different tertiarty and secondary headings. This are "enforcement, Roles of Federal Government and States and Enforcement Agencies." Maybe they should go under one larger category, or put them under the orginal enforcement category. I was also confused by the wording "The HMTA must be followed by..." Does this imply that the agencies listed must follow the HMTA, or that they are the ones who enforce it? Travismn ( talk) 15:49, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
Thanks, Travismn. Those three sections you named are actually three sections Lawlovesscalia and I are still working on, particularly with regard to the "Enforcement Agencies" section, which is going to be re-written. Thank you for your input and edits!
Jpparrish ( talk) 17:16, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
I replaced your double hyphens to an em dash. Totranm ( talk) 15:21, 6 May 2013 (UTC)
Hi guys, you've created a great and informative article. I've added a photo to your wikipage and have also been trying to fix your Legislative History table. Not exactly sure why the major amendment information isn't showing though. Totranm ( talk) 21:33, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
Hey, this is User:Sadads, and I will be adding a few comments over the next couple days below, Sadads ( talk) 18:44, 29 April 2013 (UTC)
I agree with User:Sadads that the article could benefit from adding some reliable secondary sources. I have listed the link to Wikipedia's policy on sources Primary, secondary and tertiary sources WP:PRIMARYTOPIC. Otherwise the article seems like it is off to a very good start. TucsonDavidU.S.A. 19:33, 29 April 2013 (UTC)
Please see general comments by User:Stuartyeates on articles generated by this class at Education Program talk:University of San Francisco/Environmental Law (Spring 2013)#Feedback_on_the_articles. Please respond there if you have any questions or comments. Dcoetzee 01:41, 2 May 2013 (UTC)
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I noticed on your article you cite the same website multiple times. You can give a reference a name by adding <ref name="Reference 1"> before the first citation. Later in your article if you want to cite the same source you can just put <ref name= "Reference 1"/>
This way the citation is giving a single reference number and your References at the end of your article will be more condensed.
Cheers, TotranM
Also, I don't know if it's possible but consider removing the acronym from the title. I looked at some other environmental statutes and they don't have the acronym as part of the article page name. It might be harder to link from other pages. Totranm ( talk) 18:00, 24 April 2013 (UTC)
I think that the enforcement section of the article can be reorganized. You have three sections that cover similar topics but fall under different tertiarty and secondary headings. This are "enforcement, Roles of Federal Government and States and Enforcement Agencies." Maybe they should go under one larger category, or put them under the orginal enforcement category. I was also confused by the wording "The HMTA must be followed by..." Does this imply that the agencies listed must follow the HMTA, or that they are the ones who enforce it? Travismn ( talk) 15:49, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
Thanks, Travismn. Those three sections you named are actually three sections Lawlovesscalia and I are still working on, particularly with regard to the "Enforcement Agencies" section, which is going to be re-written. Thank you for your input and edits!
Jpparrish ( talk) 17:16, 25 April 2013 (UTC)
I replaced your double hyphens to an em dash. Totranm ( talk) 15:21, 6 May 2013 (UTC)
Hi guys, you've created a great and informative article. I've added a photo to your wikipage and have also been trying to fix your Legislative History table. Not exactly sure why the major amendment information isn't showing though. Totranm ( talk) 21:33, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
Hey, this is User:Sadads, and I will be adding a few comments over the next couple days below, Sadads ( talk) 18:44, 29 April 2013 (UTC)
I agree with User:Sadads that the article could benefit from adding some reliable secondary sources. I have listed the link to Wikipedia's policy on sources Primary, secondary and tertiary sources WP:PRIMARYTOPIC. Otherwise the article seems like it is off to a very good start. TucsonDavidU.S.A. 19:33, 29 April 2013 (UTC)
Please see general comments by User:Stuartyeates on articles generated by this class at Education Program talk:University of San Francisco/Environmental Law (Spring 2013)#Feedback_on_the_articles. Please respond there if you have any questions or comments. Dcoetzee 01:41, 2 May 2013 (UTC)
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