"The Haskell Manufacturing Company was a manufacturer company" - Not sure manufacturer company is the correct phrasing, usually it's just manufacturer or manufacturing company
Could use some more information. Revenue figures, if available would be nice, as would an indication of how many employees would be helpful (I know it's in the infobox, but it should be added to the prose)
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Doug Coldwell: - Only a couple more things. A few of the refs (I believe 11, 12, 15, 16, and 17) need parameters for via newspapers.com and one of the book titles is is all caps, generally it's preferable to use title case. I also made a couple minor copy edits, please check over those and revert any you disagree with.
Hog Farm (
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19:06, 1 May 2020 (UTC)reply
"The Haskell Manufacturing Company was a manufacturer company" - Not sure manufacturer company is the correct phrasing, usually it's just manufacturer or manufacturing company
Could use some more information. Revenue figures, if available would be nice, as would an indication of how many employees would be helpful (I know it's in the infobox, but it should be added to the prose)
@
Doug Coldwell: - Only a couple more things. A few of the refs (I believe 11, 12, 15, 16, and 17) need parameters for via newspapers.com and one of the book titles is is all caps, generally it's preferable to use title case. I also made a couple minor copy edits, please check over those and revert any you disagree with.
Hog Farm (
talk)
19:06, 1 May 2020 (UTC)reply