"train so he could develop a professional attitude towards training" train/training. repetitive. Done
"Elliott was in the Fulham Academy" sounds odd, when did he join? What about QPR which is in the infobox and nowhere else? Done
Link New Malden. Done
"as a ... as an..." repetitive in one sentence. Done
"in the EFL Cup away" what round? Done
"made his league debut" perhaps say Premier League here. Done
"in an EFL Cup match" you link "EFL Cup" a couple of times, so it's confusing, this one is to the specific competition, so rephrase to make that clear, like "in that season's EFL Cup"? Done
"Elliott made his..." He made. Done
"EFL Young Player of the Season" link? EFL Awards? Done
"Championship season.[citation needed] " speaks for itself. Done
It could now use an update since the operation "was expected" to have happened on 14 September... But I'll pass it because the nature of this kind of article is that it will always need to be updated for the next 20 years or more.
The Rambling Man (
Keep wearing the mask...)
08:51, 17 September 2021 (UTC)reply
"train so he could develop a professional attitude towards training" train/training. repetitive. Done
"Elliott was in the Fulham Academy" sounds odd, when did he join? What about QPR which is in the infobox and nowhere else? Done
Link New Malden. Done
"as a ... as an..." repetitive in one sentence. Done
"in the EFL Cup away" what round? Done
"made his league debut" perhaps say Premier League here. Done
"in an EFL Cup match" you link "EFL Cup" a couple of times, so it's confusing, this one is to the specific competition, so rephrase to make that clear, like "in that season's EFL Cup"? Done
"Elliott made his..." He made. Done
"EFL Young Player of the Season" link? EFL Awards? Done
"Championship season.[citation needed] " speaks for itself. Done
It could now use an update since the operation "was expected" to have happened on 14 September... But I'll pass it because the nature of this kind of article is that it will always need to be updated for the next 20 years or more.
The Rambling Man (
Keep wearing the mask...)
08:51, 17 September 2021 (UTC)reply