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Please note the conflict of interest and paid contributor disclosure. I am a paid contractor at Hot Tomato Marketing. The subject of the article Han Jin is a client of Hot Tomato Marketing, and he has requested that his article's award information be updated.
I am also a first-time editor, so I hope I get this right! Feel free to give me suggestions on how to improve my requests.
Explanation of issue: Han Jin's award information has not been updated since 2017, so I am suggesting that one sentence be added to the beginning of the section Recognition to update the awards received by Han Jin for 2018.
Information to be added: In 2018, Jin was awarded the gold trophy in the Stevie Awards for Entrepreneur of the Year - Computer Software - Up to 500 Employees [1].
HTM Editor ( talk) 15:04, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
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. Thank you!Regards, Spintendo 21:43, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
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Regards, Spintendo 02:18, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
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Explanation of issue: Really appreciate someone's help. We need to update my client's funding amount. (See my disclosure above.) In the section of the article called Lucid VR the amount of venture capital raised by Lucid VR is no longer $2.8 million. Now the amount raised is $3.1 million (rounded to the nearest tenth of a decimal).
Information to be replaced: The company since has raised $2.8 million in venture capital
Information to be added: The company since has raised $3.1 million in venture capital [1]
References Supporting Change: https://www.sec.gov/Archives/edgar/data/1673163/000167316319000001/xslFormDX01/primary_doc.xml See SEC Series D for Lucid VR, section 13, Offering and Sales amounts, Total Amount Sold $3,054,000. Another reference for this information is NOT cite-worthy, but if it helps you to verify: https://www.crunchbase.com/organization/lucid#section-overview. I know you can't use Crunchbase as a citation--I would use the SEC filing. (They update Crunchbase themselves, but the SEC is a government record.)
Thanks in advance!
Chaud321 ( talk) 15:00, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
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Regards, Spintendo 22:19, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
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Thanks for your help!
Chaud321 ( talk) 14:59, 20 August 2019 (UTC)
Edit request implemented
Spintendo
21:30, 20 August 2019 (UTC)
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While at SanDisk he helped found [1] a non-profit organization, Bayes Impact [2], which went through the [Y Combinator] fall 2014 batch [3]. Jin then applied for an O-1 visa, after which he left SanDisk to start Lucid.
Thanks for your help! Chaud321 ( talk) 14:24, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
References
While at SanDisk he helped foundhas a ref tag placed after the word "found". This is an incomplete claim, so the ref tag cannot be placed here.
Regards, Spintendo 21:41, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
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While at SanDisk he helped found a non-profit organization, Bayes Impact [1], which went through the [Y Combinator] fall 2014 batch [2]. Jin then applied for an O-1 visa, after which he left SanDisk to start Lucid. |
Thanks for your help! Chaud321 ( talk) 19:48, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
References
Not done These references are not from reliable, independent,
WP:SECONDARY sources.
Spintendo
20:08, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
This is the
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Han Jin (businessman) article. This is not a forum for general discussion of the article's subject. |
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This article must adhere to the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy, even if it is not a biography, because it contains material about living persons. Contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or poorly sourced must be removed immediately from the article and its talk page, especially if potentially libellous. If such material is repeatedly inserted, or if you have other concerns, please report the issue to this noticeboard.If you are a subject of this article, or acting on behalf of one, and you need help, please see this help page. |
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![]() | The Wikimedia Foundation's Terms of Use require that editors disclose their "employer, client, and affiliation" with respect to any paid contribution; see WP:PAID. For advice about reviewing paid contributions, see WP:COIRESPONSE. |
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Please note the conflict of interest and paid contributor disclosure. I am a paid contractor at Hot Tomato Marketing. The subject of the article Han Jin is a client of Hot Tomato Marketing, and he has requested that his article's award information be updated.
I am also a first-time editor, so I hope I get this right! Feel free to give me suggestions on how to improve my requests.
Explanation of issue: Han Jin's award information has not been updated since 2017, so I am suggesting that one sentence be added to the beginning of the section Recognition to update the awards received by Han Jin for 2018.
Information to be added: In 2018, Jin was awarded the gold trophy in the Stevie Awards for Entrepreneur of the Year - Computer Software - Up to 500 Employees [1].
HTM Editor ( talk) 15:04, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
References
{{
request edit}}
template's answer parameter to read from |ans=yes
to |ans=no
. Thank you!Regards, Spintendo 21:43, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
Notes
Regards, Spintendo 02:18, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Please see reply section below for additional information about this request. |
Explanation of issue: Really appreciate someone's help. We need to update my client's funding amount. (See my disclosure above.) In the section of the article called Lucid VR the amount of venture capital raised by Lucid VR is no longer $2.8 million. Now the amount raised is $3.1 million (rounded to the nearest tenth of a decimal).
Information to be replaced: The company since has raised $2.8 million in venture capital
Information to be added: The company since has raised $3.1 million in venture capital [1]
References Supporting Change: https://www.sec.gov/Archives/edgar/data/1673163/000167316319000001/xslFormDX01/primary_doc.xml See SEC Series D for Lucid VR, section 13, Offering and Sales amounts, Total Amount Sold $3,054,000. Another reference for this information is NOT cite-worthy, but if it helps you to verify: https://www.crunchbase.com/organization/lucid#section-overview. I know you can't use Crunchbase as a citation--I would use the SEC filing. (They update Crunchbase themselves, but the SEC is a government record.)
Thanks in advance!
Chaud321 ( talk) 15:00, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
References
Regards, Spintendo 22:19, 16 August 2019 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Thanks for your help!
Chaud321 ( talk) 14:59, 20 August 2019 (UTC)
Edit request implemented
Spintendo
21:30, 20 August 2019 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Some or all of the changes weren't supported by neutral, independent, reliable sources. Consider re-submitting with content based on media, books and scholarly works. |
While at SanDisk he helped found [1] a non-profit organization, Bayes Impact [2], which went through the [Y Combinator] fall 2014 batch [3]. Jin then applied for an O-1 visa, after which he left SanDisk to start Lucid.
Thanks for your help! Chaud321 ( talk) 14:24, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
References
While at SanDisk he helped foundhas a ref tag placed after the word "found". This is an incomplete claim, so the ref tag cannot be placed here.
Regards, Spintendo 21:41, 21 August 2019 (UTC)
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Some or all of the changes weren't supported by neutral, independent, reliable sources. Consider re-submitting with content based on media, books and scholarly works. |
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While at SanDisk he helped found a non-profit organization, Bayes Impact [1], which went through the [Y Combinator] fall 2014 batch [2]. Jin then applied for an O-1 visa, after which he left SanDisk to start Lucid. |
Thanks for your help! Chaud321 ( talk) 19:48, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
References
Not done These references are not from reliable, independent,
WP:SECONDARY sources.
Spintendo
20:08, 22 August 2019 (UTC)