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Reviewer: Arsenikk ( talk · contribs) 17:31, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
Overall an interesting and well-written article. Most of the above issues are minor, and after they are seen to, the article should pass. Arsenikk (talk) 17:31, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
Most of the article looks good, but I'm concerned about the second paragraph in the lead. My concern is the section "Hampden was greatly expanded during the early 20th century. It became the largest stadium in the world and several attendance records were set. Its capacity has been greatly reduced since then," which although isn't incorrect in any way, is very vague. Instead of saying "early 20th century" (which could be anything form 1905 to 1940), use specific years, even if it is a range of years. Similarly, state the maximum record at the stadium. Instead of saying "greatly reduced", state the current capacity. Arsenikk (talk) 18:07, 29 October 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Arsenikk ( talk · contribs) 17:31, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
Overall an interesting and well-written article. Most of the above issues are minor, and after they are seen to, the article should pass. Arsenikk (talk) 17:31, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
Most of the article looks good, but I'm concerned about the second paragraph in the lead. My concern is the section "Hampden was greatly expanded during the early 20th century. It became the largest stadium in the world and several attendance records were set. Its capacity has been greatly reduced since then," which although isn't incorrect in any way, is very vague. Instead of saying "early 20th century" (which could be anything form 1905 to 1940), use specific years, even if it is a range of years. Similarly, state the maximum record at the stadium. Instead of saying "greatly reduced", state the current capacity. Arsenikk (talk) 18:07, 29 October 2011 (UTC)