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I think it ungentlemanly and unsportsmanlike to insult and dismiss me because you're not getting what you want, and then renominate the article while I get a few hours sleep. Many GA articles FAIL a review because they are slight or undeveloped. However, that is not the case here because everything about the subject of the article can be printed on the head of a pin. There is simply nothing more to tell the reader. Hamnet Shakespeare is exhausted in this article and everything about the boy can be contained within one or two sentences. I would like to know where he rests and I think the article should mention that. "His cause of death is unknown; his mortal remains rest in Holy Trinity Church (or whatever)." I also think the caption in the image could be expanded. What is that? A church record? Please tell us. While these are a couple of things I'd like to know, I can't fail the article because they are unanswered. This article belongs in a larger one about "Shakespeare's children" and I will develop such an article when things simmer down and I find the time to put pen to paper. This article meets the GAC: accetable prose, reliable sources, no edit warring, blahblahblah. GAC asks for nothing more. PASS. ShaShaJackson ( talk) 07:37, 2 February 2009 (UTC)
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I think it ungentlemanly and unsportsmanlike to insult and dismiss me because you're not getting what you want, and then renominate the article while I get a few hours sleep. Many GA articles FAIL a review because they are slight or undeveloped. However, that is not the case here because everything about the subject of the article can be printed on the head of a pin. There is simply nothing more to tell the reader. Hamnet Shakespeare is exhausted in this article and everything about the boy can be contained within one or two sentences. I would like to know where he rests and I think the article should mention that. "His cause of death is unknown; his mortal remains rest in Holy Trinity Church (or whatever)." I also think the caption in the image could be expanded. What is that? A church record? Please tell us. While these are a couple of things I'd like to know, I can't fail the article because they are unanswered. This article belongs in a larger one about "Shakespeare's children" and I will develop such an article when things simmer down and I find the time to put pen to paper. This article meets the GAC: accetable prose, reliable sources, no edit warring, blahblahblah. GAC asks for nothing more. PASS. ShaShaJackson ( talk) 07:37, 2 February 2009 (UTC)