This is the only area where the article comes up short. I think you need a section that deals with the cultural impact of the Halo structure, even if all you put in is a "critical reception" section (such as the one in
Covenant (Halo)). Just a paragraph with well cited comments from reviewers will be good.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
On hold until you add in the cultural impact. Best of luck! Malinaccier (
talk) 05:14, 18 July 2009 (UTC)reply
Hi, thanks for the review. The lack of a "cultural reception" section is deliberate. We ended up merging
Forerunner (Halo) into a newer article that is as yet incomplete (
Factions of Halo). A problem we had to address was how to divide the rather meager information under the "critical reception" umbrella; in the end, we decided that it was most germane under the Forerunner themselves, not the ringworld articles, which is why it's lacking. --
Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (
talk) 13:41, 18 July 2009 (UTC)reply
Alright, I'll take your word for it and pass the article. Good job overall. Malinaccier (
talk) 16:34, 18 July 2009 (UTC)reply
This is the only area where the article comes up short. I think you need a section that deals with the cultural impact of the Halo structure, even if all you put in is a "critical reception" section (such as the one in
Covenant (Halo)). Just a paragraph with well cited comments from reviewers will be good.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with
suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:
On hold until you add in the cultural impact. Best of luck! Malinaccier (
talk) 05:14, 18 July 2009 (UTC)reply
Hi, thanks for the review. The lack of a "cultural reception" section is deliberate. We ended up merging
Forerunner (Halo) into a newer article that is as yet incomplete (
Factions of Halo). A problem we had to address was how to divide the rather meager information under the "critical reception" umbrella; in the end, we decided that it was most germane under the Forerunner themselves, not the ringworld articles, which is why it's lacking. --
Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs (
talk) 13:41, 18 July 2009 (UTC)reply
Alright, I'll take your word for it and pass the article. Good job overall. Malinaccier (
talk) 16:34, 18 July 2009 (UTC)reply